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by Shakirah

person zero-delta
schedule April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was a wonderfull storie!! I enjoyd every minut of It!! That was sucha sweet and cute ending!! you just half to write more stories like this!
person Eliza
schedule April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ACIDFOLLOWER: Your responses really answered my questions, thank you!

"Hmm.. Maybe because we’ick ick fucks?....Like, look at all the writers here, we’re all writing about the same guys in some case. Hell you want to see fucked up, I rape them! Yeah that’s right rape them! Torture them, and I’m PROUD OF IT!!!"

person yamislove
schedule April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi,

OMG! girl that was so HOT! I think I need a cold shower ^_~.
I really enjoy your story. I look forward to your next.
Please write more about the pair. I never get bored reading them.

Thanks for a great story!!
person dragonkitty
schedule April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
....WOW...simply wow. i am pleased with the ending it seems to fit in with the characters...Hehehe i loved it.
person aniron legolas
schedule April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great work! Absolutely splendid! I must admit, I didn't like the rough emotion in the beginning, but it ended so well! It was both a dark and a romantic fic, especially in the end. I loved it. Please write more SetoxYami stories!!!!

luv lots, AL
person darkness
schedule April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that this has been one of the best stories I have ever written, the drama, the emotions, the hatred, the love!! It all worked together so well. Wow, you've got some talent there!! It's a shame it's ended but it ended well!!! Yey!! Definately a top favourite of mine!!
person kylie
schedule April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was a great ending. I really liked it a lot.
person Blue
schedule April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh! I'm sad now. It's over. What is there to look forward to?

*sniff* This was one of the best Seto/Yami fan fictions ever written! I enjoyed it very much, so I hope that you're very proud of it.

I don't know what else to say right now. I guess I'm speechless. You did an awesome job with the characters and I never really knew what to expect. Thank you for all your hard work.

~Blue September~
person crimsonvioleteyes
schedule April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH that was wonderful. THANK YOU my dear! *showers Shak with kisses, hanfs afs and various sex toys* I love this fic and I love you doll.

AND WHOEVER THAT BITCH IS WHO FLAMED THIS WONDERFUL AUTHOR HAD BETTER JUST SHUT THE FUCK UP. Why the hell are you reading in the YAOI section of ADULTfanfiction.net?!!

This story is awesome and doesn't deserve shit like that from any holier-than-thou dumb fuck bitch.


cve

person Michelle
schedule April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved your entire story. Your story was crazy to say the least. Don't ever quit writing cause your great. ^-^ -from 1 of your many fans