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April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hello Shakster
So once again, I am amazed. I have read “Lust, longing and a videotape” as well and was thrilled to see there was a sequel to it. Just like “Lust, longing and a videotape”, this one is going straight to my recommendation list. I hadn’t expected it to turn out like this though. The lhatehate relationship going on between the two of them was sometimes weird, but it was also good because you didn’t know what would happen next with all those mood swings. The lemons were awesome, I liked the name calling too. I didn’t like all the blood though. I once saw a scene on TV (by accident, of course ^_~) where a couple made love, somehow all covered in blood, and I’m telling ya, that was not a pretty sight. Very icky.
At the ending too, you said it was going to be a happy ending, but the fact that Seto was in that “I’m gonna ravish you”-mode and Yami at first fought back but then was like “Hurt me, I like it” made that very doubtful. Like it would start all over again. Also, the entire story gave the impression it just *couldn’t* have a happy ending. But I’m glad it did.
The Ryou/Yugi lemon was also very nice. It was just sooo cute. It was very original how you alternated between the violent part of Yami and Seto and then the sheer sappiness and sweetness of Ryou and Yugi.
Maybe you’ll also be happy to know that I started watching the series because of you, if only to get to know the characters better. I know, there is the internet where you can find tons of character profiles, probably, but that’s not that same.
I know this was freakishly long, but I got a lot to say, so I said it.
Bye, keep writing!
So once again, I am amazed. I have read “Lust, longing and a videotape” as well and was thrilled to see there was a sequel to it. Just like “Lust, longing and a videotape”, this one is going straight to my recommendation list. I hadn’t expected it to turn out like this though. The lhatehate relationship going on between the two of them was sometimes weird, but it was also good because you didn’t know what would happen next with all those mood swings. The lemons were awesome, I liked the name calling too. I didn’t like all the blood though. I once saw a scene on TV (by accident, of course ^_~) where a couple made love, somehow all covered in blood, and I’m telling ya, that was not a pretty sight. Very icky.
At the ending too, you said it was going to be a happy ending, but the fact that Seto was in that “I’m gonna ravish you”-mode and Yami at first fought back but then was like “Hurt me, I like it” made that very doubtful. Like it would start all over again. Also, the entire story gave the impression it just *couldn’t* have a happy ending. But I’m glad it did.
The Ryou/Yugi lemon was also very nice. It was just sooo cute. It was very original how you alternated between the violent part of Yami and Seto and then the sheer sappiness and sweetness of Ryou and Yugi.
Maybe you’ll also be happy to know that I started watching the series because of you, if only to get to know the characters better. I know, there is the internet where you can find tons of character profiles, probably, but that’s not that same.
I know this was freakishly long, but I got a lot to say, so I said it.
Bye, keep writing!
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April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay!
That was fantastical!
*Does the Happy Dance*
- Cinder
That was fantastical!
*Does the Happy Dance*
- Cinder
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April 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
aww i'm glad it ended like that...as twisted a relationship as it was. you did an excellent job!
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April 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just stumbled over your fanfic and what can I say...I got hooked! It's so incredible, the way you describe Setos and Yamis feelings and these conflicting emotions between them. You're amazing, really!!! I'm at a loss for words here...At first I only wanted to take a quick look inside this fic, but in the end I read the whole thing in one go! And I (personally) don't think you should write an epilouge. It's a perfect ending as it is. But that's only my opinion and of you decide to write one, I surely will read it. Anyway, all I wanted to say was: thanks for this great piece of work!
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April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excuse me BlackWindow, your comments were extremely inflammatory.
" *stickz her tongue out at stupid evil "Eliza" chick*…i suggest u apologize to this wonderful writer before i unleash some of my cruzan ass kickin' on ya! -_-"
Your threats are problematic in a five-fold manner. First, you are addressing a stranger, myself, who you do not know, and know nothing about. Secondly, your choice to make the threats online is significant in that you are cowering behind your computer. Thirdly, any derogatory comments can be sent to me directly, not put on display for the whole pervert community to read. Fourth, you assert some loyalty and towards Shakster; please get in touch with reality, she is not a friend of yours. Lastly, my initial review of Shakster’s story was completely appropriate because, in fact, it was included in the REVIEW portion of this site.
" *stickz her tongue out at stupid evil "Eliza" chick*…i suggest u apologize to this wonderful writer before i unleash some of my cruzan ass kickin' on ya! -_-"
Your threats are problematic in a five-fold manner. First, you are addressing a stranger, myself, who you do not know, and know nothing about. Secondly, your choice to make the threats online is significant in that you are cowering behind your computer. Thirdly, any derogatory comments can be sent to me directly, not put on display for the whole pervert community to read. Fourth, you assert some loyalty and towards Shakster; please get in touch with reality, she is not a friend of yours. Lastly, my initial review of Shakster’s story was completely appropriate because, in fact, it was included in the REVIEW portion of this site.
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April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Correction to my email address: ewright1180@hotmail.com
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April 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi.
So, they simply accepted their weird way of emotion and found a way to live with it. What I still aks myself is, will they be able to control themselves or will things like Wednesday happen again? Do they want it to happen agaWillWill they go back to their violent relation ship but without the psychological damage? That would mean they will indeed be able to control themselves far enough not to cause any severe damage to their bodies anymore.
This is how it ends. Wow, I didn't expect that. And what about Bakura? He's not getting any, poor spirit. ^^x
I loved reading this, I almost finished that easter chocolate rabbit during the last part. Still, I'd like to know what Yugi's thinking about Yami's decision.
Neway, you created a great piece of art. ^_^x
Baba! Horizont
So, they simply accepted their weird way of emotion and found a way to live with it. What I still aks myself is, will they be able to control themselves or will things like Wednesday happen again? Do they want it to happen agaWillWill they go back to their violent relation ship but without the psychological damage? That would mean they will indeed be able to control themselves far enough not to cause any severe damage to their bodies anymore.
This is how it ends. Wow, I didn't expect that. And what about Bakura? He's not getting any, poor spirit. ^^x
I loved reading this, I almost finished that easter chocolate rabbit during the last part. Still, I'd like to know what Yugi's thinking about Yami's decision.
Neway, you created a great piece of art. ^_^x
Baba! Horizont
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April 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*squealz* Yay, u gave them a happy ending!! ^_^ i absolutely luv u!!!!!! but not like that... anywayz, this waz an incredible, fantastic, amazing, wonderful story from the mind of a very g and and creative writer. (could i have anymore adjectives? but really, i meant every word of it) and those lemonz were hot! ^_^ ur love/hate thing going from a weakness to a strength at the end waz really a great idea, and i luv Seto's idea, he's so smart. ^_^ geez im kinda smiley tonight... anywayz, i cant believe that this amazing story iz over already, (of course if i had my way it would go on for, like, 30,000 chapters, but, i have no say in the matter *poutz*), but i will live as soon as i get over the fact that there will be no more chapters...i guess i'll just have to go read ur other stories, huh? ^_^ great job, really, on this whole story, and the prequel of it, and i can only hope that i can write as good as u some day!
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April 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh, and i have to get my two centz in to that bitch who flamed u:
*stickz her tongue out at stupid evil "Eliza" chick*
u just dun know good storiez, how can u be on aff.net in the yaoi section of YGO, and not expect some sort of perverted thing? really, i would like to know why in tha hell u r here if u dont like what u r reading.
i suggest u apologize to this wonderful writer before i unleash some of my cruzan ass kickin' on ya! -_-
there im done. again, great job on tha story girl, keep up tha good work! *bowz to almighty powerful writer of amazing seto/yami fic*
*stickz her tongue out at stupid evil "Eliza" chick*
u just dun know good storiez, how can u be on aff.net in the yaoi section of YGO, and not expect some sort of perverted thing? really, i would like to know why in tha hell u r here if u dont like what u r reading.
i suggest u apologize to this wonderful writer before i unleash some of my cruzan ass kickin' on ya! -_-
there im done. again, great job on tha story girl, keep up tha good work! *bowz to almighty powerful writer of amazing seto/yami fic*
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April 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*cheers* yup, i agree that was probably the best 'ending' that could happen. theyre both really too stubborn but smart in their own way. hmmm just wondering..what ever happened to that counselling appointment they had? o_O o well, it was a great ending nonetheless. kudos to you, shakster!