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for Rivals With Benefits

by Shakirah

person Blue
schedule March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I always feel like twitching after reading this. I must have read the first chapter like ten times at least! Oh it's so good! This take on the Kaiba/Yami relationship is so different and fresh, I absolutely adore it! It's just fantastic. It's also a major plus that your writing skills are so exellent. YAY!

You've made me very happy today!

~Blue September~
person Anon
schedule March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hotttttttttttttttttttttttt please write more
person loveswhore
schedule March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i liked ur fic. by the way that NIN song is called 'Closer'. I love the shit out of that song and this fic. write more, please.
person Anon
schedule March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Totaly kewl! Menicale Seto! Can't wait for an update!
person DirtyD (Shaksterfangfangirl)
schedule March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm hhhhhheeeeeeeerrrrrrrreeeeee! Oh my gawd. Beep you like an animal! That's one of my favorite songs! I'm reminded of why I love you. ^_^ LOsounsound like a pyscho stalker, butm nom not... not in the least. *shifts eyes* You maybe a pervert but you're my idol. So what does that make me? A pervert wannabe or perhaps a pervert in trainning? I dun'no... But enough of my inane babbling, two pants off! (I'm going for two thumbs up yaoi style... yes I know, it needs work.)
person aniron legolas
schedule March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is so intense! I like the BDSM and SM thing, but I like love too! Great job, though!

AL
person DG
schedule March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
<3 you!
person KY
schedule March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn... I love it
person Blue
schedule March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow! I think I love you! (No not really, so don't think me a stalker.)

Hot DAMN!! You're like one of my most favourite people right now! *sniff* I'm so happy. Your writing is so awesome. You manage to put out this great stuff, and yet, it's not corny at all. The lines and language are perfect.

I'm absolutely loving Bakura as "Mrs Straighforward" and Yuugi reminds me of myself before fan ficition; not so much innocent as blatantly clueless.

You're so talented. I sing your praises. All hail you!

~Blue September~