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for Rivals With Benefits

by Shakirah

person Rosebud
schedule February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is the best Seto/Yami story I have ever read.
Simply put, I loved it!
person Iyasu
schedule July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was too intense! I've never read anything that was so... so... dramatic! (That's not really the word I'm looking for, but I can't really think straight after reading your fic.) I got worried for the both of them. Talk about original... whew... I'm all disoriented like I've really ridden a roller-coaster!
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*cries* I've been addicted to this story for last 3 days... like a good book, I just didn't want to put it down... but I'm glad it's over... the emotions were getting to me... and now I can actually focus on doing my schoolwork... heh... thanks for a thrilling fic... I am forever in your debt... -Hem Ntjr Seth-
person Minx
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was good but.. im kind of confused. They're together again?.. but wouldnt it just go in the direction and become all 'ah i love you and hate you and hurt me.. wait no not that much' thing again. I think i get it but.. If you want to know what i personally think about the ending - i think - that Yami would go back and tell the others about him and Seto being together again and.. Bakura would go kill him. Its not that i dont like the ending *actually does like it* i just dont think the others would stand for it y'know?
ANYWHO *stops rambling* I liked it. It wasnt as good as 'videotape' but im still glad i stumbled across it ^^

Any chance of writing another Yugi/Ryou fic? *loves heartshipping* there just isnt enough of it *sighs*
OKay, last words?: Greeeat fic! ^_____________________________________________________________________________^
person Kim
schedule November 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love love LOVE you for writing this fanfic!!! I've never read anything as good as this in my entire life (and I read a fucking lot), so thank you so much for it!
When I stumbled over this fic I'd never imagined that I would spent the whole night sitting in front of my computer because I couldn't stop reading it! Wasn't helping me in school the next day but who cares? ;) I just wanted to let you know that nobody ever wrote such an incredible good fic, and most of all I enjoyed the dirty language and the naughty sex. So, please never stop writing fanfics, will you?!
Thank you for everything,
*hugs and kisses

Kim
person KayElena
schedule September 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your are sooooo good! This has had to be the best Seto/Yami story I have ever read. And trust me I have read a lot. I will have no choice but to indulge in all the other stories you have posted! Keep that lemony goodness coming ;-)
person Kaiserwomon
schedule August 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I never post a review, despite the fact that I like what I read, but.......your writing......has left me in awe. It has even left my yami.....in awe. That.....is a great accomplishment in itself. Thtenstense emotions, the suspence...IT'S ALL GOOD!!! Kaiser and I both applaud you for this well written piece of literary art. Maybe when I get up off my lazy ass and start typing, you can come check out my story, too. Bleh....I just need some motivation. Maybe you could give me a few pointers; er'ser's too busy laying out the code for his new video game to help at the moment * glares at him* Oh well...T_T
person Aisu Megami
schedule August 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
NOOOO!!!! YOU CAN'T TELL ME IT'S OVER! ;______; *cries waterfall tears* That was the best Seto/Yami hentai ficcie I have ever read in all of my time of loving this couple. You really brought out their true hatred and love for each other, and that's what I think made this story a success...Not to mention your good job on the lemons. ^^ Truely enjoyable...My favorite part was when Yami tied Seto to that chair XD This story of your even made me cry at parts...Very angsty, I wish it wasn't over...VV there aren't enough stories of this couple out there. No one understands the beauty of them, their hatred and love for each other, mingled...You're the only Author who's really brought out this feature in the Seto/Yami coupling...I hope you wright more stories of this couple, i Just can't get enough of your wrighting. ^^ Thanks for the wrighting this beatuiful story! ^_^ Love ya!.......In a non-homosexual way, you understand... O.o

~Aisu Megami
person Renee
schedule May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit...this was one amazing story. It had me horrified, turned on, angsty and laughing all at the same time. Well, not exactly at the same time, but when it was appropriate. You are one kickass writer and I salute you hereforth and now. Wow. I feel kind of speechless; you are a GOD.
person Silika
schedule May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! It was amazing how you made something negative into something...uh... not so negative? I guess their relationship wasn't the best ever but then who's is? Anyways I loved your story and you are an amazing author. Eh. Just thought I'd relay that to ya. Blessed be!