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thia is very cool u have to write more it's just gettting good poor jou but seto help him

your story is really good. i hope you up date soon, because I want to see what happen to joey. If Joey and Seto get together soon.

it's a good story so far but I think you best get the blond to see a doctor or at lease Seto's private doctor I use Setua and Kadjadja for their past lives others use Seth and Jojo if I got that right

good fic
you knowthere is a good yahoo group: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/A_Dragons_Lair/
you could post your fic there
i hope you will finish your fic soon
raziela

Aaa!!! You can't stop writing! It's getting interesting! And Joey haven't evenke wke with Seto and Yami yet! It would be very mean if you stop writing! So please, don't!!!

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Does this count?

First off, I like the story thus far. I do, however, think that you need a beta. Some of the sentence structure is so jumbled it's hard to read. I think the character development is coming along nicely. The only question I have is this...Why is Seto all of a sudden concerned for Joey? The necklace is affecting Joey, but what's affecting Seto? Is it because he's never seen Joey sick, or that I'm missing something. The only other comment I have is don't stop writing. I get so frustrated with authors that say their going to quit writing if they don't get a certain numbf ref reviews. Sometimes people have a good reason not to review. Normally I'm online at 2am or 3am and I'm too tired to write a whole bunch of reviews. I read at night to relax, and I don't like the (minor as it may be) threat. Even if you only have two reviewers then you should continue. That is two people that you would disappoint. Also who's to say that someone won't start reading this earlier, never knowing that it's not going to be finished. I'm sorry if it sounds like I'm coming down on you, but I'm SO sick of authors pulling this stunt. There was actually a story awhile back that I stopped reading because the author demanded reviews. So please just finish for those who are reading it now and may read it later. You never know what fans you might gather in a few months.

Good Job I really liked the story and how it is going so far. I can not wait untill you write the rest. I do like the yugi yami thing it is an interisting side story. You are a good writer keep up the good work i look forward to reading the rest.
Yours Truly
Jennifer

short chapters but very nice story. can't wait for more, this is soooo good.

yes keep the Yami/Yugi!! and maybe you wante to name Joey Jono as his past life!