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for Ice

by Ykarzel

person Anon
schedule July 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ohh that was so sweetly sweet! And hot. Like a freshly baked chocolate cake. I loved the way Kaiba spoke, it felt very in character.
person Jiyachan
schedule May 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aw man you should totally add another chapter.Thenagain that might ruin oit...xD Thanks for remindin me why seto/jou was my fav. yuioh couple for YEARS.
person Yami nefertira
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was good, though part of me is wondering, is the sex scene what really happened with Seto x Joey after the experience with his drunken father or was it just what Joey dreamed? I'm confused!

Still a good fic though and very hot!
person Olivia
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY!
MAYBE, NEXT TIME, YOU CAN MAKE MORE
CHAPTERS WITH THIS KIND OF PLOT (AND/OR MORE).
THAT WILL MAKE IT EVEN MORE INTICING!
person hato_ryou_chan
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok. I love this story and want to read Snow Day but I can't find it. I've been trying to find it for a few hours now. can you send me the story please I would love that. send by email please if you do at all. thank you.

P.S. i love all your stories. you are a very good writer.
person ...
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sorry about not reviewing this on fanfiction......*winces* but i don't really know where it is....... *looks up w/big puppy-dog eyes*......could you maybe send me the link........ if you have time of course!.......imean, i don't want to intrude.......this was an awesome story.....and i just notcied.....i see, to keep reading your fics w/out really meaning to......they just seem to draw me to themselves.....like they're whispering 'reeeeaaaad meeee........reeeaaaaddd meeeeee......'......or......something......anyhoo- you write really good seto/jou fanfics! seto/jou and bakura/ryou are me favorite pairings...... (i think that i like b/r because it usually has slight bondage in it.......i don't really like bondage with knives and all that [no s&m] but i kinda like the idea of the whole being tied down thing.......if i could be a guy in a yaoi-full ^^ relationship, id be the uke^^.......anywaaaays......:my yami: is telling me that i should probably stop babbling on about things that have nothing todo with reviewing- which is what i clicked on 'review' to do......so i guess i'm sorry for babbling , and im sorry that i got off track on telling you how damn good your story was/is......sooooo-here goes: your story was/is damn good.......thank you
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person ...
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh yah!.....i forgot to ask.....if you :do: have time......could you mayhap send me the links to your other lemons, as well?.......spank you!!!!!! (YK: she means 'thank you'....) me: der! i think she probably understood me! now go back to sleep! i was trying to write a nice review! (YK: but....you already wrote a review! that was only 5 minutes ago! did you already forget?!) me:..... (YK:okay, okay......good :night:.......you happy now?) me:yes! let me just tell da awseome author how awesome she is! then i'll be right there! (YK: whatever.....) me: thanks awesome author!!!!!! (i can't remember how to spell your name *sheepish grin*).... ciao! and good night!
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person Beth
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That is really good. You described it in good details and how it ends. Great. Do write the morning after this event.
schedule February 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I already reviewed this at FF.net but I just decided to review it here to tell you once again that this is an awesomely delicious ficcy! Loved the lemon and Seto/Jou moments. You captured their characters perfectly! I loved it! Wonderful job!
Kudos

~DarkRoseBlood ^_^
person nicky
schedule January 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is like one of the best fics I've ever read... (I added it to my recs btw., hope that's ok with you)
Even though I loved the lemon, especially the hugging and ensuring in the end, I have to admit that my favourite part of the story is the scene in Jou's appartment.
In one word... it was perfect!
I loved how Seto noticed all the small details and how neither of the boys spoke a word, because it would have ruined everything, as if they were having a silent understanding. Also the thing about Jou, caring about his father despite how he treats him... that just made it all the more believable, 'cause that what situations are like in real life.
The way you portrayed Seto is just wonderful. He notices everything but doesn't show it or speak about it (as always - just, this time, his behaviour is exactly what Jou needs - that leaning against the counter was sooooo real), and Jou, being the tough guy who hides all the bad parts of his life, trying to save everyone else...
Man, I gotta stop or I'm gonna go babblin'. Guess you know what I meant to say: Love it!