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for Carry Me Home

by Aten

person Sapphire
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Joeys ok!
God, have I told you how much I love this story? Well I will anyway, its great!

But damn, that is nost ast a evil cliffie, that cliffie is a cliffie from hell! Couldent you have written atleast one more line and not make us wait in suspence? I mean really, if we have read this far do you honestly think we would not read one more chapter?
person KC
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Me: AUGH!!! HOW COULD U?!
Yami: *laughs* dat's what u get...
Me: *eyes narrowed at her* aren't u suppose to be out?
Yami: oh! yea, I forgot my credit card... *walks away*
Me: since when does "my" Yami has a "credit card?"
Yami: FOUND IT!!!
Me: goodie, can u please buy it for me?
Yami: *sighs* oh, all right... *kisses me on the cheek and leaves*
Me: *snicker* i really want dat Yugioh PC game and dat Blue-Eyes White Dragon it has inside the box...anywayz, please continue 2 update and i can't wait for more!!! continue!*wal*walks away*
person PharaohYamisPrincess
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG....you are so evil!!!
person Lady Elfskye
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm.... could he have said no before saying yes??? Arrghh!!! Update!!! Update!!!!

Lady Elfskye
person Polka Dot
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think Group therapy is necessary here, big time.
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
DD: Okay...at some point, Joey's gonna stop calling Seto "Kaiba" and then we'll know he loves him.
YD: I wanna kill Joey's father.
DD: You've said that before.
YD: *snarls* I'm saying it again!
person KC
schedule April 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Me: aw!!! how could u?!
Yami: *snicker* we'll just have too wait and see
Me: u better make them happy... *thwaks Yami in the head*
Yami: HEY!!! WHAT WAS DAT FOR?!
Me: for snicerking at Seto and Joey u BAKA!!!
Yami: I'M NO BAKA!!! *leaves room*
Me: YES U R!!! anywayz, continue 2 update and i can't wait for more!!! continue!!! *runs after Yami*
person Fel5
schedule April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aiiaaaah, call 911! The vice squad! Child protection! The army! Storm troopers! Help Joey get back to Seto, pleeaaase!!! Please save him, before it's too late! Sniffle, poor Joey, please be well, my fav bishie(sob!).
person Lady Elfskye
schedule April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh!! I hope they find him sooon!!!!

Lady Elfskye
person Terra
schedule April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Let's see Seto kick some daddy butt! Poor Joey, all he really wanted to do was please his lover and then this happens. Can't wait for the next chapter.