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Hayden's uncle is a disturbed man. I do hope Bakura and Marik can 'help' him with his isseus in Virus.

Holey fooken chit!! (gotta keep it clean, chibi present.) Ohhh!! I will personally kill that little **&^(*()*yselyself.Charlie that is. Arrhhgghh!! Man oh man!! Cliffie!! GRRRR!!!!


Lady Elfskye

OMG!!! I cannot believe that happened... poor Ryou... and I can't believe Joey can be such a JACKASS!!! Please make this a happy ending....

Oh, how ironic that Seto and Joey end up with Charlie's nephew. It is the same kid, right?? And if Charlie is the reason why Hayden's so messed up, then I understand why. Hmm, where oh where has Ryou gone?? Oh, where oh where could he be?? Damn, Kura's pissed!!! You have one smart chibi!! Go girl!!

Lady Elfskye

EWWWW!! Icky, gross! COOL!!!
Such a tender Seto and so t too too.

Me: WHAT?! U MADE JACOB DEAD?!
Yami: *snicker* its her story
Me: FIVE KIDS!!! I KNOW SOMEBODY WHO HAS 6 KIDS!!!
Yami: yea, though they are out of college but one of them is the same age as u
Me: *nods* yup, his a great friend (kinda). HEY, HOW DID BAKURA CAME IN?
Yami: last time i check, he wasn't even in the story...
Me: *blinks* yea, along with Ryou!
Yami: eh, it alwayz happens in every story...
Me: shut it Yami!!!
Yami: *laughs* its true...
Me: I GOT A HAIRCUT TODAY!!! U KNOW THE SHOW ANGEL? MY HAIR IS LIKE COREDLIA!!!
Yami: *grumbles* a lot of kids were completmenting her...
Me: Yami's jealous...
Yami: why would I be? *leaves room*
Me: that's because they don't know you... *coughs* anywayz, PLEASE CONTINUE 2 UPDATE!!! CA WAI WAIT FOR MORE!!! CONTINUE!!! JA NE!!! *runs after Yami*

Sob, sniffle, that made up about ten times your lil' cliffie, sob. God, Joey, don't go there, don't turn into your father, sniffle. Poor Ryou, and I don't evn want to think, what Marek is going through, now. Then again, imagining Bakura and Malik, fuming in rage at Joey's insults..hehehee, I could just imagine those two blowing a fuse.
And Seto-way to go, lil' CEO! Finally you're able to stand to your innermost feelings, very nice touch there! Two thumbs waay up!^^

Holey Fuuchin Chit!!! What the hell??? Damn, He musta had a whole lot more than one to go off like that!! Alcohol makes people do the stupidest shit!!

Lady Elfskye

(Facefaults, as she reads the last sentence) You-you-how-*dare* you do this to me? *ME*?!? The godmother of all cliffhangers?!? Why, I should most certainly..give you a bouqet of roses and some candy for writing such a sweet, sad, wonderful story. Sigh! Poor Joey, why's everybody up to beating and hurting him?(Ponders that a while) Hmm, actually, so do I-but he's just the most drop-dead gorgeous bishie ever!^^ Even if he's hurt, or confused, or mad, he's so..beautiful-sigh!^^
Oh, and Mokuba is simply adorable, but then, he always, is, ne?^^

Seto sure loves his puppy. That was a sweet ending.