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for Carry Me Home

by Aten

person aspiker
schedule March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm *very* impressed with the start of this story! The way Jou's thinking and his character development is great. 8-)

Write On!
person Aspara
schedule March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Cool. Fun. More.
person MarikIshtar77
schedule March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey cool, new story! I like! I have only one (silly) question; After Joey hooks up with Kaiba, will he go up in ranks to "The Queen of Bullshit?" (Sorry-I'm weird tonight. Must be the lack of sleep...thank goodness this week is Spring Break)
person Dragonblade
schedule March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes, please update!! This is getting interesting ^^
person PharaohYamisPrincess
schedule March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*shudders* This is such a dark opening to a fic. I love it. *huggles Jou* Everything will be alright. *comforts him*
person Kat
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Shiiiiiit, poor Joey! Ahhh, you have a way with words. I'm all choked up here! I hope you update soon!
person Lady Elfskye
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! This is going to be another rock-n-roll story!! Very good start!!!

Can't wait to see how you run this one!!!

Lady Elfskye
person alostblackcat
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awwwww

poor jou!!

this sounds really good!

please update soon!
person Terra
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very realistic and gritty. Alot of pain and heartache in the man.
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
DD: OOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!
YD: Good stuff.
DD: Can't wait for the next chappie.