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for Lust, Longing, and a Videotape

by Shakirah

person Kokoru
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Christ, girl, that was so fucking awesome! Lol, I was getting wet from Yami jerking off.. phew.. The rest of that story did me in, I can tell you that.. ^_~ The pervert in me likey. Lol. Way to go!

-Kokoru
.. who was supposed to be doing a paper but was sidetracked by this yummy story..
person crimsonvioleteyes
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Awesome job. That's all I can say. Hot, steamy, kinky and absolutely incredible.

cve
person Terry
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
:Mouth refuse to close:
:Eyes refuse to blink:
Wow. I didn't think it could be done, but I'm utterly amazed by this...I don't know what else to type 'cept that was the best lemon i've read in....EVER! Great job.
person Z
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW...that was...reall good. One of those toe curling stories! ^_^ Good job
person zero-delta
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story I loved it are you going to continu?
person Blue
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Holy! Holy! Holy!!

What can I possibly say? It was long, it was detailed and the writing was exquisite. You put so much detail in and throughout the entire story managed to do a wonderful job with the characterizations. My favourite couple written into such wonderfully descriptive sences, by such a talented author; what more could I ask for? I'm not just sucking up either. This was seriously a great fic.

All I can say is: the next time you feel like getting carried away, go for it!

~Blue September~
person N-J
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O_O Oh gods that was Great!!! write more of thise please i am so glad I leard how to read english!!!!!!!!
person Yami_Tenshi
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow... like, oh wow!

That was AMAZING! Yami makes such a good bitch... *snicker* I loved the constant antagonism, it just made it so much sexier. Yami x Srockrocks, but I think you brought it to new heights. Well done!

Hmm... anybody got an ice cube?

Yami_Tenshi
person Kendra
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!! You are a fucking lemon goddess. That was incredible. I hope you write more stories withe even more lemons. That was amazing, spectacular, wonderful,and did I mention how incredible that was. Great job.
person yamislove
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! That was so hot!!! I love your fic!
Please write more !! I just love these two.