I understand that this was written years and years ago and even though the writing isn't horrible ( typos and such ) I can't help but be slightly grossed out. I don't feel like Kaiba would be into "dirty talk" and I was more than a little uncomfortable with the dubious consent that this fic was based off of. Certain parts were funny, such as when Kaiba's talking about his meat...Or any part with Mokuba ( Mokuba is my favorite, he's a good kid ). While this isn't the best fic I've read it's decent. I in no way intend to be flaming you, but I give this a 1.5/5. I won't be reading the rest of this "series" ( regretably ). If you get this, thanks for the ride?
I got to the end and I wanted to read more lol!
Awesome job!
Love and Hugs,
Thunder
*re-reads several times*...
Kinkey fuckers.
WRITE ANOTHER! lol. Its too good not to write something similar again.