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for Lust, Longing, and a Videotape

by Shakirah

schedule August 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I understand that this was written years and years ago and even though the writing isn't horrible ( typos and such ) I can't help but be slightly grossed out. I don't feel like Kaiba would be into "dirty talk" and I was more than a little uncomfortable with the dubious consent that this fic was based off of. Certain parts were funny, such as when Kaiba's talking about his meat...Or any part with Mokuba ( Mokuba is my favorite, he's a good kid ). While this isn't the best fic I've read it's decent. I in no way intend to be flaming you, but I give this a 1.5/5. I won't be reading the rest of this "series" ( regretably ). If you get this, thanks for the ride?

schedule December 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This story is one of my favorites on this site. It's hot and dirty and all sorts of messed up.
schedule April 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely great work!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Rosebud
schedule February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was so damn HOT!
I got to the end and I wanted to read more lol!
Awesome job!
person Iyasu
schedule July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*eyes are very wide* Um... whoa... I have nothing to say, really... it was just that good...
person RWThunder
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I admire you. I love S/Y and I always thought that their get-togethers might be something like this but I could NEVER write it. You're amazing, hats off to you. That, and PLEASE write more S/Y fics, you're obviously really good at it.

Love and Hugs,
Thunder
person ...
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
W00t! Bondage! This fic is seriously flawless!!
person Valonsbiznitch
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my god. *speechless* that was the MOST erotic thing ive ever read. You definetly have a gift. Fuck me it was just so..so..everything! *cannot find words to express complete and utter hotness* ...

*re-reads several times*...

Kinkey fuckers.
WRITE ANOTHER! lol. Its too good not to write something similar again.
person shiba
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh......WOW..... i......i.....i cant describe ..... wow.....i don't know what to say...i loved it... it was amazing...holy crap..... i hope you write more yami/seto pairings.......now i beleive i have something that i need to cool off.
person Harpie Yamazaki
schedule December 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow... best Seto/Yami fic I've ever read. Seriously. Awesome...

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