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for Just don't take the dog

by Kyoko

person Kat
schedule March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooo that description of Jou! Lordy, drool-worthy. It's a weird world you're building and I so want to know what you're going to do next! I hope you update again soon.
person Rayne
schedule March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. . .I can't wait for this to be updated.
person Terry
schedule March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Blasted it! Kaiba can't get a break even in his fanasty world! Freaking ppl. i'm really into this story! Please update soon!
person Rurouni_agra
schedule March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This looks like it's gonna be good. Please update soon and often.
person Kschur32
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you got me hooked. Ready to see what happens next.
person KC
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Me: what's going 2 happen now without Kaiba Corp?
Yami: *snicker* i wonder who's the boss
Me: shut it Yami!!!
Yami: but....
Me: don't say anything!
Yami: *grumbles and leaves room*
Me: *smiles at victory* anwayz, CONTINUE 2 UPDATE! CAN'T WAIT 2 SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!! CONTINUE!!! *runs after Yami*
person Kat
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love the title!! The story's good too. Can't wait for the next chr eir either!
person Anon
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Update please this is good