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for Just don't take the dog

by Kyoko

person KC
schedule March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Me: lol, Mokuba spying on a girl's room?
yami: must be his girlfriend
Me: *thwaks Yami* IDIOT!!! TIS IS NOT YOUR FIC!
yAMI: *rubs head* ow...i was only saying though
Me: hehe, oops?
Yami: *kicks my legs and ran out of room*
Me:o.O dat was uncalled for. YAMI, YOUR GETTING IT LATER ON!!! *sighs* i tink dat CEO set up Jou so he can't trust Kaiba...waahh! i hope you'll make tem a happy couple cause if Kaiba wakes up finding a little bit embarrassed...lol dat would be cool! anywayz, continue 2 update and i can't wait for later chapters!!! make it longer next time!!! *runs after Yami wit a hose*
person MomOfFluffyAndFluffier
schedule March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love the story. Hope Joey and Seto are able to stay together and hope Tusaka gets what he deserves. in the real world, hope Seto regains conciousness and his memories and he and Joe are able to get together...Joey is able to admit his feelings to Seto. Overall...Hope each Seto is able to find their way to their own universe and that Kaiba corp is successful in both with Joey and Seto having a wonderful and happy life together in each. Hope all works out for Mokuba in each universe as well.
person Kat
schedule March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yaaaay, I'm glad you updated!!! I'm sorry the flamer got you down. Just remember how many of us want the story to continue. I was scared that you'd gotten bored with this. *sniffles* I'm glad you didn't. I've been anxious to know what hap wit witey aey and Seto. Lordy, Lordy, Lordy!! Mokuba's a perv! *cackles* I love it!! I hope the next chapter comes soon.
person Starchan
schedule March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Guess who? Yes, you are right! (You probably didn't even guess, oh well) It's me, Kiyteoura! Hehe! I changed my name, yet again. ^^ Hehe.

I love the story, even though I read it before you posted it, I had to read it again! ^^

Can't wait for the next chappie!!
person Starchan
schedule March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I forgot to tell you!! If you get a flamer do this...

Flamers beware!

Freezer the flame, store it, and laugh about it later when you are done with the story and have lots of other reviews! "Ha! Take that flamer!" ^^
person moon
schedule March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
more more more... Let me know when you update
person Kiyteoura
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww. . .!!!! I feel horrible for poor Jou! And Seto too! *sniffles* Update soon so hopefully my tears will go away. . . *sniffle*
person MOFAF
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hope Seto is able to get back at Tusaka for what he's doing to both he and Joey in the alternate universe as well as get things going better for himself, Joey and Mokuba.

In the real world hope Seto wakes up soon so that he can be with Joey.

Hope both Seto's are able to find a way back to thier own universe and thier own Joey and Mokuba.
person Terry
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh coma Joey was almost raped, real Joey was almost raped. Both Sete lye lying unconscious! I love it! Please update soon! These is definitely a suspense thriller!
person KC
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Me: yay, it updated!!!
Yami: *sighs* oh boy...
Me: CONTINUE PLEASE!!!
Yami: here we go again...
Me: can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Yami: *leaves room*
Me: poor jou in the real world, his worried i hope in the later chapters that you put Seto/Joey together!!! well, anywayz, continue 2 update and i can't wait for more!!! *runs after Yami*