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August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That is such a beautiful story!!! I couldn't tear my eyes from it!
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September 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
nice story
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July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great story
loved it
loved it
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June 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HEY!!! This iz one a the coolest stories I've read! I luved the whole idea of the way "coma Seto" had lived with "coma Jou" and stuff. I wish that you could add more to it!!! I didnt want to reach the end of the chapter! I would like to read more since this iz a great story. Great Job!!!
~Rinni
~Rinni
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May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooo I loved this chapter! I'm glad you didn't leave us hanging about Seto in the coma world. I'd have screamed if you had. *tilts head* Is this the end or will there be more? (more please!!!) *G* Ya did a great job on this! KB
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May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Me: *blinks* i had no idea
Yami: *smirk* here she goes again...
Me: augh! is it finally over?
Yami: whaddya think?
Me: shut it
Yami: in www.fanfiction.net we don't know how to update our stories
Me: we've tried to update but the stupid edit preview is always coming up
Yami: not that but she meant by replace a chapter and we accidently did
Me: *pouts* yea, but it was chapter one...it doesn't matter anyway
Yami: *sighs* i wonder why
Me: i wonder why you aren't leaving...
Yami: *growls aeaveeaves room*
Me: *smirk* anywayz, u should try 2 make a sequal! so, UPDATE AND I CAN'T WFOR FOR MORE! *runs after Yami*
Yami: *smirk* here she goes again...
Me: augh! is it finally over?
Yami: whaddya think?
Me: shut it
Yami: in www.fanfiction.net we don't know how to update our stories
Me: we've tried to update but the stupid edit preview is always coming up
Yami: not that but she meant by replace a chapter and we accidently did
Me: *pouts* yea, but it was chapter one...it doesn't matter anyway
Yami: *sighs* i wonder why
Me: i wonder why you aren't leaving...
Yami: *growls aeaveeaves room*
Me: *smirk* anywayz, u should try 2 make a sequal! so, UPDATE AND I CAN'T WFOR FOR MORE! *runs after Yami*
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April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooo at least you haven't given up on this story! Trust me, I'll wait for the next chapter!
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March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oi, Seto can't get a break:0 Try to usurp a corporation...drift away from Jou....I hope you update soon!
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March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, I've got one more chapter to read and I'll probably get it read in school, but I'm loving this so far. Jou and Seto are by far my fave couple. It's just so happy to see them together. Well, byes.
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March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, I still love it. I seem to love all stories that have to do with Seto and Jou. So, 's m's missing eh? That's not good. Damn that Tusaka. He should die a slow and painful death from taking Jou from Seto. *picks up a katana* Do you think this will work?
Katarina: Don't do it.
Me: But why not?
Deserae: Because you can't kill him just yet.
Me: Please... *big puppy eyes*
O'leary: No! Burn him on fire! Fire is good!
Me: Just shut up! And leave me alone.
Rachelle: Give him a bunny.
Me: No! Shut up! All of you be quiet right now! *stalks off looking for Tusaka with the katana in her hand* *laughs evilly* *sings* I'm off to kill Tusaka! Oh it's such a wonderful day!
Katarina, Deserae, O'leary and Rachelle*shake their heads*
O'leary: She'll never learn. Fire is the only real way to harm someone.
Katarina, Deserae and Rachelle*walk off leaving O'leary dancing like a weirdo*
Me*still singing*
Just ignore that. My stupid voices in my head constantly try to be involved. Damn how I hate them. *still searching for Tusaka while singing*
Katarina: Don't do it.
Me: But why not?
Deserae: Because you can't kill him just yet.
Me: Please... *big puppy eyes*
O'leary: No! Burn him on fire! Fire is good!
Me: Just shut up! And leave me alone.
Rachelle: Give him a bunny.
Me: No! Shut up! All of you be quiet right now! *stalks off looking for Tusaka with the katana in her hand* *laughs evilly* *sings* I'm off to kill Tusaka! Oh it's such a wonderful day!
Katarina, Deserae, O'leary and Rachelle*shake their heads*
O'leary: She'll never learn. Fire is the only real way to harm someone.
Katarina, Deserae and Rachelle*walk off leaving O'leary dancing like a weirdo*
Me*still singing*
Just ignore that. My stupid voices in my head constantly try to be involved. Damn how I hate them. *still searching for Tusaka while singing*