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for The Reason

by LilKittyKay

person Jessica
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ACK! YES, YES! FINISH! FINISH! YOU CAN'T JUST LET US HANG HORRIBLY LIKE THIS!!! ESPECIALLY WITH JOU IN SUCH CRITICAL CONDITION!!! TOO MUCH PAIN!!! PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE UPDATE!!!

...Aside from some typos phrasing, this sounds really good! So please come back and finish!!! Thank you!!! ^____^
person inhuman lover
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you need to put up the next chapter so i cna find out what happens next i must knw tell me now
person SetoxJoey_lover
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
the story must continue i like the story when kaiba shows hes emotions but there arent many so this one must continue and joey has to get better and life a long and happy life with kaiba
person Anime Dreamer
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Don't Fuckin end it there!!!! GODDAMNED CLIFF-HANGERS!!!! update!!!!!!!! please!!??!?!!??!?!?! ur doing great! awesome so far..**wipes away tears**
person Rose
schedule November 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved the first chapter. It was sad. I hope you continue to write the story cuz i wanna know wat happens.
person Moon
schedule April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
if jou's not gonna die and if seto and jou get together i'm all for it man i love the stuff with kaiba being all overprotective and gee having jou hurt gives kaiba more reasons to coddle jou so continue this fic i like it nice choice of song by the way
person Li
schedule March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
NUUUUUUUUUUUU~! You gave to update this soon. This fic is lutelutely terrific. I want to know what happens next. Does Jou live? Does he die? This is one of the best Jou-torture fics I've read in a e. Ae. And having Jou go to Yami and Yugi's home when he was beaten was good, a nice little separation from stories that have him somehow end up across town in his painful stupor. I applaud you ^.^ I enjoyed the first chapter and I't 't wait to read the next one ^.^
person Kat
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooo continue continue continue!!! Pleeeeeze!!! It's gonna be a kind of torture waiting to find out what happens between them next. *mumbles to herself while walking away* "jou's gonna make it, jou's gonna make it, jou's gonna make it....." *sniffle*
person Santurion
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Of course we want you to continue! This is getting interesting! It's to good to be unfinished!
person leaf zelindor
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
-shifty eyes- i love it...please tell me you're going to finish it? i'd cry or something but i'm really tired and i need to go to sleep -lol- ~Leaf!~