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May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
kickass story! i love it! woot lovies lovies lovies! ^^ Sorry Ryo cant have roasted mashmellows though...so i made him and Bakura this! *FLAME THROWER* use it well muhahahaha
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May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, this is quite a different protrayal of Yami-kun! Poor Ryou...I feel for the kid, I really do. Although it seems the Pharaoh is starting to have feelings for him.
Yami SSF: Someone should rape him like that - might teach him perspective.
Anyway, I like the story, and I hope you update soon.
Yami SSF: Someone should rape him like that - might teach him perspective.
Anyway, I like the story, and I hope you update soon.
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May 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yami's jackass. Poor Ryou, he doesn't deserve this. Please keep updating, I wanna see what happens.
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May 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow... I love this fic... you really draw out pity for Ryou and the others, while saving animosity for Yami and Seto... *glomps Ryou* Poor baby... I'd love to reore ore (I was happy to see there were five chapters, and although they took me about an hour to read, I found myself wanting MORE!)... but you don't have any ... ... *snifflesobsniffle* I'm really enjoying this - you're style of writing and sense of description is excellent... update soon, onegai!
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May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was a really good ch.! i cant wait to see what happens next!
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May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* im a little sad your cutting out the graphic scenes, ( i guess i will have to get my smut fix elsewhere ) but i really enjoy your story, and i know the plot will be great! keep up the exellent work
PS please excuse my many gramatical and spelling errors, i am not an english major as you can tell....
PS please excuse my many gramatical and spelling errors, i am not an english major as you can tell....
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May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*meow* i love it exept yami is being such an ass!!!!! what did my poor yami ever do to u?????? or bakura or malik or ryou????? poor baby's.......... anyways u had better make it a happy ending or i'll sick my malik on u
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May 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ie ite it please update sooon!!!!!!!!!
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May 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don't thinu shu should censore your storiehe ghe graphic scenes just pull the reader in deeper, and makes them feel a kinship to the characters. This story is one that I am enjoying, and I think that you should continue as you have with all the gory details intact. Yhank you.
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May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You wrote the last chapter at school? your my hero!
The plot reminds me of a fic written by ryou-bakura1, but i think i like yours br! nr!
The plot reminds me of a fic written by ryou-bakura1, but i think i like yours br! nr!