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for Royalty

by FireWeaver

person Lamara-chan
schedule May 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow... this is one fucked up fanfic... I LOVE IT! When do we get to Seto? I wanna read about Seto, Malik and Marik! And Pharaoh said Seto could join them later. When does that happen? Keep updating I love it!
person ShadowofLight
schedule May 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*crying and blowing nose* Oh poor Ryou!! This story is great tot he point where I want to jsut go into it and beat hte living shit out of Yami and Seto. You made them so heartless and sadistic!! *grabs anotehr handful of tissues* I do like this story don't get me wrong and that person who left u that mean review, u know screw them. it is jsut jeaoous it didn't think of the idea first. please u have to cont i have to know what happen. crap, i need a new box of tissues.
person Akuma2636
schedule May 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think the story is beautiful, the first chapter made me cry, Ryou and his little brother <----- big wimp, loves sappy stories!!!!! Anyways it's so angsty I lot I t I hope you put more chapters up soon, I can't wait!!!!
person Hannah
schedule May 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
^-^ I loooove the way it's going, poor Ryou T.T *hands her a cookie for a job well-done* here you go ^_^ More, more! Ja ne!
person Mande
schedule May 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well-written without being tasteless. Sad to know that this stuff DID happen all the time in the ancient time, but we romanticize everything about those times. Can't wait for chapter 7 :D
schedule May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good work, albeit poor Ryou getting desecrated in that manner. >.< I hope things get better for him! Yami's an! W! Write more!

XD
person Horizont
schedule May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi!

Wow, that's one of a rape. Poor Ryo, really, that's the best Yami-Seme I've ever seen, and it really is good. I mean, he's a god damn pharaoh, he's a living god - that's how his character should be, not that weakling he is in the series.
However, I do want Marik, Malik and Bakura to appear again! They are so... lovely!
All three: *glare*
Marik: "Malik, Hikaris don't glare."

Neway, please continue soon! Otherwise I'll leave some more reviews... ^^;;
Horizont
person Sai
schedule May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was a good ch. update soon!
person PirateDucky
schedule May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!! AN UPDATE!!!!!!!!!! I love this story and was waiting forever for an update! YAY!
person Neko-jin Ryou
schedule May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love the fic..... please please please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You're an awsome writer