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for Royalty

by FireWeaver

person Atreyu
schedule June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ack, more more ^_^ *hands her a gazillion bags of sugar, cookies, candy and coffee as a bribe* =O Yami's getting soft ^_^;; And hopefully everyone gets a happy ending, poor Ryou being tramatized by Bakura x__x.
person AngelStarFire_Hikarist
schedule June 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oohh... you're evil. ^^ You manage to put suspence in every chapter, and it's driving me nuts! *starts to go insane like 'Kura* D'oh. Anyway, I really enjoy reading your fic... it's very origional (well, not the whole 'whore of the Pharoah' thing, but the rest is!). Never a dull moment. *glomps* Update soon, ne? Oh... and Ryou gets my vote... *hugs said Bishounen*
person Horizont
schedule May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi!

Wow, you reallly know how to scare one, don't you! *stare las last scene in shock*
But... um... way, I love him! *means Bakura* He's gorgeous, isn't he!?
Bakura: "I'm starving, I'm being tortured, how can you find me gorgeous that way?"
Me: "Yeah, well, right..." *hugs Bakura*

Please continue soon! *begs* Although it's Ryou's story... write some more about Bakura as well! I'm a great fan of his story as well! ^^x

Horizont
person -_-
schedule May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love this story, more!
person malikgurl4life
schedule May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was good but a bad cliffhanger i hate cliffhangers but that was REALLY good. its starting to get intence and i like that. so hope you update soon.
person Dragonblade
schedule May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh man, that's a really evil place to end! poor bakura! poor ryou too!

I would review 10 times and make you update really quick, but i don't think i can to that.....................

you HAVE to update soon! or i'll *insert random threat here*!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Ril
schedule May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow...what a fic...I feel so sad for Ryou! But I really like your writing style!
person Ehhh, I forgot.
schedule May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is guud! It's sad, but it's good! Does that make me a bad person? No! I don't want to be a bad person...ack, I'm ranting. o_o; You NEED to continue this, or else I won't have anymore bedtime stories!
person Sai
schedule May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
updateupdateupdate! please?
person DragonBlade
schedule May 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
poor lil' Ryouuuuuuuuu! but that was a good chp, enjoyed it very much!
when's bakura going to come out of that .....place? c'm 'm feeling sorry for him!