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for Royalty

by FireWeaver

person Ril
schedule June 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwwwwwww...Yami loves Ryou! ^^;;;;;;
person Zoe
schedule June 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AHHHH! Nuuuuuuu! Darn you, evil cliffhangers! *waves fist at them* Please update again soon, this story is so sad (I actually cried when Yami first took Ryou. ^_^;;) but I love it! :D
person Renee
schedule June 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Gah! Poor Ryou! At least Yami healed him this time. *slaps Yami*

Yami: OwieEE!!!

Your fault! And you too! *decks Seto*

Seto: I am amazed at your lack of strength.

...damn.

Anyhow, good couple of chapters there. Poor Bakura... o.0
person PirateDucky
schedule June 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awww... Yami has a heart..... It's so damn *CUTE*!!!! Anyways, he's not going to let him die, is he. Or maybe a plot turn? He dies, but Yami or one of them brings him back to life somehow? Don't mind me, just musing to myself. I do that a lot.... Anyway, keep up the good story!!!
person little reader
schedule June 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE YOUR STORY. IT'S THE GREATEST! PLEASE UPDATE!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!
person Ravens_rain
schedule June 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
If you don't update and soon, I'm sending you down to Bakura. I'm sure that you'll be very tasty after his being starved and not aloud to drink. Since it is common knowledge that the human body is made up of 73% water. Almost 80% in feamales because they bare children. So you could bring him back to life! *Stares* Don't make me do it, undate and spare yourself the pain. Other wise I really like this story and hope that it ends well!



~~Raven's Rain
person Sai
schedule June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yay! yami is finally warming up to ryou! ^_^ update soon!
person Dragonblade
schedule June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
poor Ryou! poor Bakura! it's so saaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad! but it's a really good cer. er.

awwwwww, it's so sweet with the whole yami/ryou thing! man, seto sound so eeeeeeeeeeeeeeevil

P.S ok, no threats this time, but still, update soon!
person shorty
schedule June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
poor ryou, poor bakura. will bakura live or will he died?
if he died what will happend to marik? will her turn to ryou for come comfort? how about marik and joey? will they run off together? are you going to put yugi in the story?
person AlesserBeing
schedule June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ah, you're so mean to my Ryou ::pouts::
........oh who am i kiddin'..i love it^^
lol, can't wait for the next chappie *grins*
Ja!
~Alesser*Being~ *is glad she decided to check this story out*