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well we;ll well what do we have here? no UPDATES!!!!!!!!-cys- UPDATE!!!! and fix mar......name irs MARIKU for ra's sake!"i shall banish u to the shadow relm!"<.< that was mariku.........oh and he says to get his name right to,or he shall hack into ur comp and destroy ur work!<.< now mariku thats mean,and if u did that,u would never get ur update!"...well then i would destroy all the other works HAHAHAHAHAHAHA"<.< dont mind him,its a good ff,just update phwees?

FWAHAHAHA i am GOING to review 10times,and u WILL count it as 10 SEPERATE reviews!!! -looks at with her mariku look,and theif king bakura pops out behind her- hehehehe NOW UPDATE!!!!!!!! otherwise -shuders- u dont wanna know what i'll do,let alone THEIF KING BAKURA!!!!! oh an befire i forget,the only thing wrong with tic,iic,is that marik is acctually MARIKU and malik is still malik......jsut thought u would like to know the apprpitae tiltle for my precious mariku -pets mariku-

awwwwwwwww.. that's so saaaaaaad. poor marik! i was wondering when yami'd fall for cute lil' ryou..........^_____^

update soon!

I loved this story! a bit angsty, yes. but well written none-the-less. Im sorry i didnt review but i was waiting for a couple of chapters before i reviewed! and i do tend to be lazy about typing..i was a bit angry in the beginning about how Yami turned out...>_< im sorry but that was one of the reasons i didnt review. Dont get angry!!!! i really like the pairings tho...im actually used to the Yugi/Yami, Ryou/Bakura, Marik/Malik pairings lol the alternative pairings. Please update soon! and when u do update pe e-e e-mail me!@ Arigato~!

I love this fic.... It is my total favorite and I mean it!!! I normally don't read Yu-Gi-Oh fics inless I totally love them sooooooooooooooooooooooo. PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!!!! I'M BEGGING YOU!!!!!!

is it me or do these things always happen to Ryou??

GAH! More angst! T_T

Careful of your tenses, they tend to slip away on you...

Yummy stuff! Keep it up (no pun intended!)

ORIGINAL VERSION:

Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10

Comment/Review:
I AM GOING TO MAKE MY POINT CLEAR!!! YOU CAN MAKE SETO BE GAY I DONT CARE!!!!! BUT STAY AWAY FROM YAMI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Zena: Hmmmm....I’m gonna take that horrendous flame and make into a beautiful shower for Ryou, Bakura, and Malik to have some yumminess together....sorry to those who were enjoying their roasted marshmallows or steak (Ryou and Bakura!), but I think you would enjoy what was just mentioned above and what’s below better!

ZENA’S VERSION:

Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 100 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 100 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 100 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 100 of 10
Overall Rating: 100 of 10

Sour or Yummy Lemon: YUMMY LEMON!!!!!!

Comment/Review: (in response to the one above)
Excuse me, GAY???!!!! That’s not what’s going on here. This fic is not about guys being gay, it’s about bishies engaging in sexual activity, which is all good! These bishies are beyond men and gay, they’re beautiful creatures having yummy fun which classifies as TASTY, not GAY! Gay doesn’t exist in such a world where beautiful bishies reside...just pleasure, fun and love!!! It’s so sweet!!!! LEAVE THEM ALONE!!!!! *attack stance*

aw...poor Bakura...even though Malik has always been my favorite Bakura comes in a close second. Sadly I am one of those people who think that everyone should end up happy...well except for Seto of course wow he's a sadistic bastard in this story...but anyway I do love this story