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for Royalty

by FireWeaver

person Heathen
schedule March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is great, I'm actually surprised at how good. You should be proud. I look forward to seeing this updated.
person penny
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! i LOVE your story actually i love all your stories ive read nearly all of the and they just keep getting better, pleas keep on writing you seem to have this skill with writing that keep your readers wanting more.
person The Empress
schedule February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my lord. *still crying* Poor Bakura. *sniffling* He's not dead is he? Is he gonna get saved? Please let someone save Bakura. *tears flowing* I wish I could save Bakura. *tries to stop crying* *sniffles* Ok. I love this story. I really almost started crying when I read what they were doing to Bakura after Ryou came down there. Whoo, man. I'm still trying not to cry. Please write more. I wanna know what's gonna happen next. I can't hold it anymore. *starts crying her eyes out*
person Mia-Chan
schedule February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon. I didn't look when you updated last, but it's now 02-10-05....I'm patient too...I'll wait too! but please? update? I wanna know what happens. The story is very good and very well-written, however, there are a few weird spelling mistakes or typing errors...the story is still read-able, just a bit confusin when you hit on of those words that are like "alik alk on the bed..."
Anyways, update update update!
person Anon
schedule February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update any time soon???
person Sarina Fannel
schedule December 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. Your writeing style is very enjoyable. Your plot is rather orginal, I like the way you actually get me all worried for the charectors. I hope you write more onto this story very soon.
person Seir
schedule December 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story! I have one question though, what happened the the REAL Chapter 6 and 8? WHen you actually check he chapters, it goes Royalty, Royalty Ch. 2, 3, 4, 5, 7, and 9. Anyways. Really good story, hope you update soon
person Sae
schedule November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very awesome, can't wait for more!
person ken
schedule November 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I REALLY LIKE THIS STORY!!! even though theres not like graphical stuff ...but i really enjoy it... i like how yami is nice to ryou now..haha
pls write FASTER!!! lol

i giv it 10/10
person AJAngelique
schedule November 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*confetti and rose petals all around*
I'm SO loving how this story is unfolding, just wish yu'd sprinkle in more sex sceens *tries to hide her horns and tail*

Can't wait to see what happens next!!!
*takes a nail and draws out ticks on a chalk board to count out the minuets till the next chapter is posted*