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by FireWeaver

person Honoo
schedule June 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE!!And more about Bakura's past!!Especially with Yami in it ;) I LUV YOUR FIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person ancientcutie
schedule May 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Stares speechlessly at story and then sheds a tear*

I've one word for this story...beautiful. I absolutely adore it! I hope you continue real soon! The plot's very original and true. In the meanwhile, would you read my two new yugioh stories Okashi hana(desert flower) and Utah no wo tsuki (to sing of the lunar moon)? I would be very honored to be reviewed by an extrodinary author like yourself!


ja ne! - ancientcutie
person Honoo
schedule May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!!^________^ I can't wait till 'Kura meets Yami!^________^Poor 'Kura...It's going to be a happy ending right?
person aspiker
schedule May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Looks like Bakura isn't going to have much fun in this story...
I do hope yill ill continue with this tale--> a well written fanfic is a joy to behold!
person War-chan
schedule April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damnit!!! I'm SO at at you right now! I wanted to read and see what was going to happen!!!!!! Hope you make ch.4 very, Very soon! (p.s. love the fic ^_^).
person Terry
schedule April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Man, Bakura gets no peace in this fic! Please continue! I can't wait to see exactly what Yami did to Bakura.
person dragonkitty
schedule April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY! i thought the fic was dead..but it's not.. Yay poor Bakura. I love this ficcy.
person SecretSoul
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you know, i thought i reviewed for this but i guess i didn't. and why haven't you updated? you should you know, i like this a lot and i'm sure other ppl do too, they're just too lazy to review..even i am sometimes. keep it up, ok?
person The Heartless Wench
schedule March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That BASTARD pharoah hurt MY Kura?! My poor Kure-kun! The phh shh should rot in the eternal depths of hell for that! Anyway, I love this story so for,I can picture the pharoah being a rapist bastard, since I hate him *as if you didn't notice -_-`* but I've always felt that Bakura had a reason for acting the way that he does, so this fic is right up my alley. That and your writing is descriptive and perfect. In short- you MUST write more!
person dragonkitty
schedule March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was soo great. I like your idea of going into Bakura's past...it intrigues me.