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February 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
^^ Awww....Raye-san, it really took you too long to update. 'Nways, is this going to turn out to be a Ryou/Bakura thing, or what? It's kinda getting confusing. But continue. I wanna know how this ends.
Jia Z. aka Thalia the Muse
Jia Z. aka Thalia the Muse
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February 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Reviewing: Chapter 10
This was a really good chapter. Lots of character growth (which is something I am very fond of). Ryou is slowly developing into something; I'm not sure what, but I'm worried to say the least. *winks* Anyway, Bakura is...well...Bakura. And we love him for just that reason, ne? Heh. Well, keep up the good work.
~Jane
P.S. - Eyeball scene was uber-awesome.
This was a really good chapter. Lots of character growth (which is something I am very fond of). Ryou is slowly developing into something; I'm not sure what, but I'm worried to say the least. *winks* Anyway, Bakura is...well...Bakura. And we love him for just that reason, ne? Heh. Well, keep up the good work.
~Jane
P.S. - Eyeball scene was uber-awesome.
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January 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oooh! Chapter 10 was awesome! (I've read the whole thing, btw. Sorry to hear that ya got kicked off ff.net. That sux). Poor Ryou... I feel so bad for him. His situation... stinks to the the least.
And... *blinks* ... did I just read right? Did Yami Bakura just utter the word "pretty"? O_O;;
Ayod Botla
And... *blinks* ... did I just read right? Did Yami Bakura just utter the word "pretty"? O_O;;
Ayod Botla
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January 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Not a lot of action, but that's okay! ^^ This is still a really good fic. And hope you'll get the 11 chapter up soon. And will this be a Ryou/Bakura ending?
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January 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Don't ya just hate ff.net sometimes. ^^ Anyways, glad that your fic hasn't disappear. This is one of the best fics I've read. And I really hate cliffhanger endings. XD They are just so annoying. 'Nways, hope you update soon! ^^
Au revoir mon amie!
Jia-chan a.k.a Thalia the Muse
Au revoir mon amie!
Jia-chan a.k.a Thalia the Muse
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January 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hiya, you know who this is. Peem. Anyway, I'll be the first to review this lovely piece of work and I'll hopefully see some more of these lovely chapters. WoOt. Ahem. Anyway, nice fic all around. Great Ryou and Bakura characterizations.
~Jane
P.S. - He was fliriting with Tristan. We both know it. *winks*
~Jane
P.S. - He was fliriting with Tristan. We both know it. *winks*
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December 8, -0001 at 12:00 AM
Hey there, I've been following this fic for a while, and I absolutely love it. It's a shame you don't have many more reviews for it. Seems like all the best fics get ignored that way. Maybe you should try writing only semi-coherently, throw away the plot, and bastardize the characters- that'll bring more reviews! (I'm joking! Don't look at me like that!)
Anyway, here's a list of my favorite things in this fic: 1) The way you left the spirit with no name. I know his name is actually Bakura in Ancient Egypt, but I doubt he remembers that. 2) I like it that you only focus on a few characters, like Bakura and the spirit, and a bit of Tristan in the last chapter. It makes it so much easier to get in depth with such few characters than if you tried to make sure they were all there and represented somehow. 3) I don't know if it was your point, but I feel absolutely miserable after reading the latest chapters (in a good way!). Poor Bakura! It seems like he has no one left to turn to, what with his father not trusting him like that, and his "friends" not even noticing something's wrong. Jeez, his life sure does suck.
Well, I do hope you won't give up writing this fic for lack of attention. I'okinoking forward to reading more, and I hope everything works out for Bakura in the end (though I know it won't). :)
Anyway, here's a list of my favorite things in this fic: 1) The way you left the spirit with no name. I know his name is actually Bakura in Ancient Egypt, but I doubt he remembers that. 2) I like it that you only focus on a few characters, like Bakura and the spirit, and a bit of Tristan in the last chapter. It makes it so much easier to get in depth with such few characters than if you tried to make sure they were all there and represented somehow. 3) I don't know if it was your point, but I feel absolutely miserable after reading the latest chapters (in a good way!). Poor Bakura! It seems like he has no one left to turn to, what with his father not trusting him like that, and his "friends" not even noticing something's wrong. Jeez, his life sure does suck.
Well, I do hope you won't give up writing this fic for lack of attention. I'okinoking forward to reading more, and I hope everything works out for Bakura in the end (though I know it won't). :)