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WAI! I'm so happy you finally updated. I've been waiting for a really long time. Anyways, I hope you update soon. Oh, I wonder how long this is going to last. I once heard from a friend and he said that Ryou dies or something. Though Bakura lived. You know, when he transfered himself to Yugi's Puzzle.

Anyways, update soon!

Jia

Nice story! *claps* Can't believe I didn't see it before. You must keep going. I demand it.

Wow!!!
I'm deeply impressed.
Possibly the best R/B I have ever had the honour of reading and definitely one of the best Yugioh stories out here.
Although I'm all for happy endings; for this story I can pass if necessary.
I like how we get both point of views and Your gradual, thorough development of the plot.

Thank You!
... and write

*sigh* No happy ending, huh? I should be used to it by now, miss depressing author. Suslyusly, though, could you maybe perhaps go a little easier on your fans? You write so well we get quite attached to these characters you make your own, and it's hard on us to be constantly depressed at the end. Heh. I'll shut up now. --your lurking fan

LD: So basically, you are mastering the art of Bull Shitting.
Karen: Well, that was crass.
LD: Hey, I am just paraphrasing.
Karen: *rolls eyes at LD* The t yot you could do is say something nice about the story. Very few writers actually make the attempt to hold true to the series. I think it is comendible. The story is expressed very well.
LD: Hey, I like it too. I just thought the comment at the end was amusing. I think you have the characters pegged, especially Yami Bakura, and he seems like a difficult one to figure out. Please update again as soon as possible!

Hey there rayemars! ^^ You updated! Yes! It took you so long. I was waiting like forever. Anyways, this chapter was a little different thhat hat I expect 'cause I thought you would have seen the subbed version of the Battle City Arc, instead of watching the revolting dubbed version. A brilliant author such as yourself should really watch the subbed. The subbed of Battle City is much more interesting. Believe me, I own the DVD set. Well, hope you update soon!

Kamikakushi a.k.a Jia Z.

ohhh i'm soo happy i'm reading this storry againg keep posting chapters

WEEEE HEE HEE!!!!!! ^______________^ WAY AWESOME!!!!!!!! I SOOOOOOOO hope that you continue this soon!!!!! ^.^ WEEE HEE HEEE!!!! *prances off goin on about how much better this fic was from her own fics* WEEEE HEEEE HEE!!!! ^^

This is awesome. You must continue this story. It's not over yet, right?

Oooh!r Bar Bakura!!! ;_; Damn it... allowing Yami Bakura to do that to him like that... Poor dear... *sighs* At least Yami Bakura has the "courtesy" not to hurt the poor kid... *sighs*


Ayod Botla