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July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like how this chapter summed up the episode of Bakura and the others duel on duelist kingdom, one of my first episodes I saw ;p Poor Bakura, but I can actually see this all happening throughout the story! Can't wait to read more, great job!
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March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh!!! You MUST update!!!! This is great! and i need sooo much more!!! =^.^= pleeeeaaaaase!!! plz email me when you update
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March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHHH YOU HAVE TA UNDATE SOON OR IM GONNA DIE X( PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE
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January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow...chapter 14 was amazing. You are insanely talented and you'd better never stop writing.
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November 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is such a great fic!!! I love! It! It's so angsty and it really captures a side of the Yu-Gi-Oh series that was never even speculated on. It's awsome!! I can't wait to see whappeappens in the next chapter!!
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September 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow.
This is well written. keep it up ne?
Take care, Ja ne!
This is well written. keep it up ne?
Take care, Ja ne!
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August 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hello! I thought I should drop a line and tell you how much I like your story. It's really cool! And I wished some of your stuff was a of of the anime. My fave chapters are 5 & 6. This fic is a masterpiece. Keep up the good work! I can hardly wait till you reach the Battle City stuff! :)
--Eagerly Awaiting the Continuation of This Fanfic
--Eagerly Awaiting the Continuation of This Fanfic
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August 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ah! You finally updated rayemars-san. ^^ It's been so long...I thought you gave up on the fic. Anyways, though the last chapter was a little...confusing, it was stiloodloody good. ^^ Hope you update soon.
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August 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You know, a lot of great writers are only recognized after they die. You could go for the whole posthumous
worship and just croak? *is trying to be helpful* Anyway, you can tell me all you like that this story is not worth the time, but it’s things like this that make it worth reading:
"For that bruise on your face?" Tristan asked coolly, not looking up from his textbook.
Can we say perfect? The sentence is short, but not poetically short. It’s not filled with stupid adjectives or other meaningless stuff. You don’t need a lot of big words or long descriptions to paint the picture. You just do it, and that’s what makes you so good.
Plus, I love how I could almost ‘see’ Tristan’s face. And I love the way Bakura is just SO evil. Tis wonderfulness.
Until your next installment.
~Artemis Z.
P.S. – Uh…Tristan doesn’t fool me. He wants Ryou. Crazy, kinky spirit and all. *winks*
worship and just croak? *is trying to be helpful* Anyway, you can tell me all you like that this story is not worth the time, but it’s things like this that make it worth reading:
"For that bruise on your face?" Tristan asked coolly, not looking up from his textbook.
Can we say perfect? The sentence is short, but not poetically short. It’s not filled with stupid adjectives or other meaningless stuff. You don’t need a lot of big words or long descriptions to paint the picture. You just do it, and that’s what makes you so good.
Plus, I love how I could almost ‘see’ Tristan’s face. And I love the way Bakura is just SO evil. Tis wonderfulness.
Until your next installment.
~Artemis Z.
P.S. – Uh…Tristan doesn’t fool me. He wants Ryou. Crazy, kinky spirit and all. *winks*
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August 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Woooowwww.....please more!!!!!!!!!!!