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You're very stingy on details!! I can't wait to see what happens though.
What's the Ceremony? Who/what is The One? Where's Ryou-chan???

Ne! Update! Pwease?

That was great!! Poor Grandpa Motou!! Update again sooN! I wanna know why Kura wants Ryou!!!

this is such a good story please write more soon it killing me to continue the rest of the story make the next chapter longer









P.S. don't mind the corrections from my review i'm in a rush

Lordy, what a cliffhanger!!! Poor Yugi and Jou. *shudders* what a way for Grampa to go.... *boos Bakura* ahem, couldn't help it. Pleeeze update soon!

I like the plot so far. It leaves you hanging.

This is a really good story....EXCEPT Jou has Honey colored eyes!!!!

Good story so far, it'd be perfect if you hadn't said Jounouchi's eyes are Sapphire, they are brown, often called honey brown, chocolate brown... often compared with food... that's because he is so yummy, also he has warm brown eyes. The Sapphire eyed man in Yu-gi-oh is Kaiba, usually his eye color is called piercing blue, cold blue, ice blue... etc... But besides that, I love the story, it doesn't even ruin it. I'm just a big Yaoi fan with a big mouth. Keep writing and update again soon, I look forward to it.