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by MarikIshtar77

person ferocity
schedule May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hi, i just finished reading!!! I hate cliffies there the only thing in the world that get me heated. Last time, i passed out from beer trying to get over it.

Lats see what i made of this fic:

1. I think Kaiba is cheating on Joey with Yami or Bakura. That seems likely. Cuz bakura was missing for awhile. Like Marik said.

2. Mokuba is having an affair with either Isis or Mai or Serenity. (duh?)

3. Yami, Bakura and Kaiba are working together, as in yami forces yugi to break up with joey and to make sure they stay apart, he asks Kaiba for a little help in playing the puppy. But what he doesn't know is that Kaiba liked joey from before and this is a perfect opputunity for him. so seto pretends that he's only plg jog joey.

4. The video tape shows Duke and Tristan gettin' their freak on with Yami or doing drugs.

5. I don't the baby belongs to Tristan at all...i think its someone else. And moving back to Egypt hello!!!!!! That proves she isn't screwin mokuba.

6. Isis and Serenity have a little thing goin on......how else would she find out about Tristan cheatin on her.

I and I running out of theories continue later.........
person Deb
schedule May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe Mai and Isis...i wondered about that when Mai rang up the person after her argument with Duke; as she mentioned 'baby', i was like....'hmmm....baby....Isis is pregnant...hmmm', but i wasnt too sure!
Anyways, amazing chapter! Totally loved it!!
Lotsa Luv Debs xxx
person Tanya Maxwell
schedule May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* So I reviewed before, but AFF was having issues...*smashes computer*

U_U I can't even remember what I wrote...oh yeah... Poor Yami...he should just dig a hole and bury himself right now. Better than trying to pry the rod out of certain other yami's hands! So what exactly *was* on the tape? I've got an idea, but...hehehe. So many twists and turns in this story! I'm lovin' it!

More soon!!

Tanya~
person Tanya Maxwell
schedule May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
"HA! Beat this Joey!" Best. line. ever. LOL!! Yami's so competitive!! Thankies for lemons!! ^_^ Tanya's gonna go lie on her bed and think about the next chapter now ^_^ PARTY!! methinks somethin' gonna be goin' down... ya, gangsta talk - gotta love my bro! lol. More more more!!

Tanya~
person Elle-Fate2x1
schedule May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The chapter 27 was great!! I really liked it; I wish Jono knew what Seto had really done so he doesn'make the biggest mistake of his life.
person Deb
schedule May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!!
Ooo i wonder what Yami wants to show Yugi....hehehe ^__^
And whats Jou gonna do to Seto? I cant wait to read more!!!
Lotsa Luv
Debs xxx
person mariks_toy_hikaru
schedule May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hikaru: Score! *pumps fist in the air* Two lemons in one chapter! This is gonna rock!
Marik: ...
Hikaru: *ruffles his hari* Come on, Rod head, you know you like it. You get to read about Bakura and Ryou! Its already a well known fact that they both turn you on, so you'll love this.
Marik: *grumbles* Shut up.
Hikaru: Ugh...well, I'm looking forward to reading it!
person ACIDFLOWER
schedule May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AWWW Yami and Yugi Fluff

*Hugs them*

Yugi: I...I...can't breathe...
Y Oh Oh Ra where is her hand? *looks around puzzled*
AF: What do you mean *slips hand by Yami's bits*
Yami: uh...
Yugi: I...I still can't breathe

Update I want more goodness of my babies when you can
Loves ACIDFLOWER

schedule May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY!! *bounce* Excited for lemons!! Aw, Yami/Yugi so cute!! So Marik likes Malik, too, huh? *cough* FOURSOME! *cough* Ahem, excuse me, I'm a little bit sick ^_^... Joey's revenge is gonna be sweeet. *plays tape* Oh yeah... More more!! I'll be back tomorrow!

Tanya~
person mariks_toy_hikaru
schedule April 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hikaru: Hm...what does this mean, Rod head? What are the cards telling us?
Marik: Fuck off. I don't believe in that crap.
Hikaru: *shoves Marik's head into a cushion* Don't tell me to fuck off!
Marik: *mumbles something into the pillow*
Hikaru: *rolls eyes* Anyways, I like it! Keep going! O.O But, what's Rod Head gonna loose, I wonder...suppose I'll have to wait.