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by MarikIshtar77

person Reili
schedule May 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Gah! I love you! Marik and Malik lemon! *claps* YAY! w00t, who's Seto after? I think I might have an idea, but knowing me it's probably wrong. I suck.
(It's true)
ANYWAYS, looking forward to the update!
person Kat
schedule May 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OHHHH NO!!! Not fair! Evil cliffhanger. Great chapter! Loved the note to Malik! Okay, Duke needs to learn what a zipper is and how to keep it closed! Sheesh. *G* Gotta love Seto's hentai side. That's good. Can't wait to see part two!

KB
person neko-chan
schedule May 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
its nothing really.... just wanted to let you know im enjoying your story quite a bit....lots of fun....... cant wait for every update......... one thing though, i was really happy about that "moment" between bakura and yami, pity stupid yami wasnt quite up for it........
person Reili
schedule May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
w00t. Maybe I'm just stupid, but did Malik do something -bad-? Uh oh. Like traumatize Mokuba? Or AM I REALLY ON CRACK?
(Yes, yes, I am)
person Deb
schedule May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooooooo the suspense!!!!!
Whats with the duel monster card? Is that the card Malik bought for Isis ages ago? Or am i just getting confused coz iv been reading this story over and over and over etc....hehe ^___^
But that could explain the Mokuba kidnap stuffs....hmmmmm *ponders* God i love you!!!!!!!!!!!! *bows to the amazing authoress*
Please update again soonies!! *gives u a servant to clean the house for ya* ^__^
Lotsa Luv and Huggles
Debs xxx
person JavaGreen
schedule May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sends the cleaning brownies over to help her get done faster*
person TanyaMaxwell
schedule May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! What's Doc gonna tell Seto? Where the hell is Malik? and is everyone gonna run into each other at the hospital...Hm... I remember Isis when she was pregnant...Labor is going to be quite the ride!! More soon, yes? And more shirtless, tanned, sweaty Joey!!

Tanya~
person mariks_toy_hikaru
schedule May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hikaru: Oh my...
Marik: Stupid Tomb robber. ed hed him right...
Hikaru: By Ra...that was really unexpected. Duke and Isis?!?! Woa....keep going! Where is poor Mokuba?!?!
person TanyaMaxwell
schedule May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes, yes, bring Mokie back!! Preferably in one piece with all parts intact;) Where is Marik? Bastard, throwing a rock at Bakura like that...I oughta...eh, what can I say? I've got a weakness for blonds...hehe.

So Duke and Isis, eh?

You know what I'de toe to do...

I want to give just *one* person in this story a fatal STD. I swear, they'd all be dead within a month!! LOL!! Of course, immunity would be granted to all those sexy.

Tomorrow is Tuesday!! YAY!!

On a side note, I hope Yugi gives Yami a smack or two.

See you soon!

Tanya~
person Deb
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!
Duke??
And wheres Mokuba?? Wheres Marik?? Whats Yami doing?? *passes out*
Please please update soon, i really really cant wait to see what happens next...
Seriously, i have no fingers left from where ive chewed them off...^__^
Love you and this story lots!!!
~Debs xxx