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by MarikIshtar77

person Kat
schedule May 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh thank god! He didn't make that kind of deal with pegasus! *gets faint with relief* Well Hell... now who's the one that hurt Mokuba??

“Smack my ass and call me Bakura?” Malik snickered sarcastically as he walked out of the bathroom. *starts chanting "do it, do it, do it"*

“Joey, I slept with Pegasus." EWWWWWWW ew ew ew ew ew ew ew *shudders* Peggie-boy cooties. ewwwwwwww

Awwwwww Joey and Seto are just too cute together! Yes, I'm biased. Shoot me. *smirks*

*cracks up* Deus ex Machina?! I love it!!! Oooo tomorrow morning? SWEET!

KB
person mariks_toy_hikaru
schedule May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hikaru: gah! *throws arms around Marik* You can be sensitive!
Marik: *shoves her off* go away, little fuck...
Hikaru: *glomps him again and cuddles* Squeel!!!!
Marik: ...why do I even bother...?
person Kat
schedule May 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WHAT!??! Seto set up his own brother for kidnapping?! That #*$%^$ bastard! *fumes and snarls*
Wooohooo, great lemon!!

“I went to Dairy Queen for a chili dog. I must have passed out on my way back home.” *chokes on her soda then falls over laughing* Oh my god *wakes household up with hysterics* Best line ever!!! Oh crap! The last author's note.... Shiiit, I'm gonna start wheezing soon. *shakes head* I think Atemu needs a really biiiig towel!

*wanders off cackling*

KB
person JavaGreen
schedule May 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah, so the truth behind Seto's seemingly foul plotting begins to be revealed. Yay!

*chuckles as the image invades her mind*

Yami: *reaches down and begins to touch himself slowly, eyes closed, a hoarse moan escaping his lips*

Bakura: For Ra's sake Pharaoh, put that away!

Malik: Gods yes, the last thing we need is for you to be secreteing spawgaingain_.
person JavaGreen
schedule May 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
((goes on because she's an idiot))

Seto: *smirk* explains where you two came from.

Marik and Bakura: O.O!

Yami: Can't I have any alone time?

Marik: Seto, you've managed to both disgust and frighten me...

Bakura: there's a first, does he get a prize?

Seto: It explains alot don't you think?

Yami: *pulls his pants up, throws up his arms in frustration and stomps off*

((ok, I'm done now))
person Debs
schedule May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hehe glad u like the reviews! *sighs and tosses hair* my work here is done! ^_^
GREAT chapter!! Omg!! I loved the M/M scene, it was sooo kool! (love that pairing.....as well as all the others lol)
Oooooo whats the dealio with Seto and Pegasus??? Thats gotta be interesting!! What were they 'doing' together? OMG! is that who Seto was having sex w?????????
I wonder what the card thing is about....to me it still points to Marik...but....he was at the Dairy Queen hehe...soooo....hmmm....
Have to wait and see i guess...damn...^__^
Amazing chappie as usual huni! You totally rock!!! ^___^ Cant wait til you update!! *sits and fidgets coz she doesnt have patience*
Lotsa lotsa luv
Debs xxxx
P.S. Did the bandages work???
P.P.S. If the servant gets mouthy, just slap her.....^_^ cyaz xx
person Reili
schedule May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*falls over laughing* Oh god. Best thing I have ever read in my life! That last comment you put in, I mean. Gah, you were actually going to listen to what I said? SCARY THING SCARY THING. Yup yup. Hmmmm, Seto and Pegasus. That's so odd. And Marik and Malik! *hugs* That was awesome! I love absolutely anything with Marik in it, espcially YM/M!! Whoop. Hmmm, someone tried to insult me the other day and called me a lemon. Frankly, they were quite disturbed when I fell over laughing and got kicked out of class. Go figure. ANYWAYS, ignore me. Looking forward to the update!!!
person Tanya M
schedule May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think I missed an update because: YAY! TWO CHAPTERS!! Seto's fucking around is making me want to hurt him, but everyone else\ie. ie. Malik, Marik) fucking around is ok by me ;)

Atem? O.o Interesting...*is never going to be able to look at yami the same again*

Great work!! *snuggle*

Tanya~
person mariks_toy_hikaru
schedule May 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hikaru: *chants* Lemon! Lemon! Lemon!
Marik: Heh...little fuck can't back mouth me and get away with it!
Hikaru: o.o....*glomps Marik* LEMON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Marik: Eh...?!?!?! @.@ Get off me!
person Kat
schedule May 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooo good chapter! I can't wait to see what Seto does. *gasps* Malik and Marik lemon?? *squeals* I can't wait!!! That's gonna be soooo goood! Will we find out if Isis had a boy or a girl? Does Joey get a chance to open up a can o' whoopass on someone? Deary me... how will he take Tristan and Serenity together? La, fun!

KB