rate_review Reviews

I'm glad to see you're going to have a sequel. This story deserves one. 8-)

Oooo great cha! I! I cracked up at Joey's unintentional impression of Scooby Doo. Dayum, him attacking Seto in the car was great! More of that please. The whole scene in Mokuba's room was really sweet. I think they make a good family. I seriously love his reaction to Seto asking "are you coming?" That was just perfect.

Duke and Tristan... There's a couple that ought to spend more time fighting about who used the most hair gel than anything else. *smirks* Thaght ght to be fun to watch.

Yaaaaay, I'm glad Ryou and Malik are all good now. They're cute together.

Can't wait for part two of this chapter!!

KB

Well, I don't know how you do it. To have kept my interest after 37 chapters is amazing. Sorry I didn't review sooner, but I just bit the bullent and opened my own account on here.

Anyway, great story. I wanted to kick Yami from here to next week for interfering with Yugi and Joey's relationship, and I love what you're doing with Ryou and Bakura - the whole soul room thing is very cool. You even managed to make Marik-Malik likeable, and I'm not their greatest fan.

Isis is a bitch. I know she'd pregnant and all, but as soon as she knew who the father was, she should have told Tristan and Duke. It isn't fair to either to keep them in the dark.

Nevertheless, you have succeeded in making the characters all very real and very human; something that I admire gly. ly.

Till next chapter! Je ne!

Oh, I forgot three little things:

"I went to Dairy Queen for a chili dog and must have passed out on my way home." LMAO. God that was funny.

The little bit with Atemu at the end of the chappie. Funny and scary at the same time, ne?
Yami SSF: Only in the thought that Atem might have ALL the powers of his namestake. Good lord, can you imagine the look on Bakura and Malik's faces if he produced kids all on his own? Poor Yugi would probably have a heart attack

And last but not least: LOVE THE LEMONS! You write terrific, emotionally intense and detailed lemons. Keep it up!

*hugs!*

I'll be oddly sad to see the story end. But happy at the same time to see all the threads resolved.

Hmm...*pretends she didn't hear authoress say anything about story's ending*... Joey/Seto cuteness!! Ryou/Malik cuteness!! Duke/Tristan cuteness!! Can't wait for next chapter...I want Seto to kick Mokie's hurter's ass!!

Tanya~

Ah no! Must know what happens! Gah, I'm so confused. But anyways. The story is ending already? NO! I love this story! Yup. Lovely lovely lemons appearing all over the place. Bwuah. BEST STORY EVER. Ah, but I am beginning to ramble so, I suck!

ANYWAYS, now I'm looking forward to Friday! WHOOP.

Gah! I don't know what it means! I'm such a twitnit. Um, I don't know if that's a word . . . meh. It's as much of a word as cowprint is as a colour! yup. That Joey and Seto episode was the best thing I've ever read in my life! So sweet! And are we ever going to figure out who did kidnap Mokuba? Because I'm really starting to lean towards aliens again . . . ACK I SUCK. Anyways, I love your story lots. Looking forward to tomorrow morning!

Aww, glad things worked out between Joey and Kaiba...but does this mean no revenge? >< "I put your boxers in the freezer because I *love* you, Seto..." <-- it could happen ^_^... Poor sadness for Yugi.oughough big gladness for Malik/Marik... sxxy little bastards... More tomorrow, you say?? ^_^ ^_^ <-- one for each of my personalities...

Tanya~

PS - I'm goin' for a chili dog...want one? ;)

Son of a bitch, the whole review didn't go through...here I am refreshing because there are too many damn connections, and then when the page finally loads...!!!

Ok...I said something about Malik and Marik being sexy, something about wanting to steal Joey's tape and something about poor, poor Yugi!

Also - :D to school being over - I still got 3 weeks :(
Can't wait for next chapter!!

Tanya~

PS - goin' for a chili dog...hoping to pass out in a gutter and wake up to Malik...wanna come? ;)