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Woooooooooow. that got so confusing. Ok... lemme get this straight... Honda and Isis were living together, but aren't anymore, because Isis told him the Otogi was the father... then we find out that Yami only made Yuugi break it off with Jou because he wanted to be with Yuugi... but THEN it turns out that Yuugi raped Mokuba to get Jou back from Kaiba (Which he was currently dating), because he found out Yami DIDN'T really love him (Nor did Ryou(Bakura), after that little event in the store), and just made Yuugi break it of with Jounouchi because he wanted to go to Egypt with Isis, because the baby is his. Yuugi is crazy, and Jou takes him to a psych-ward in Domino hospital. Seto tells Jou that he had slept with Pegasus to keep secrets away from the media. Mai and Isis screwed, and so when Honda found out 'Otogi' was the father, and and Otogi desided to get together, but not after his talk to Shizuka. Malik and Ryou had been appearing with bruises and cuts, due to the fact that their Yami's had been making rough man love to each other. Malik and Ryou also fall in love, and are now an item. At a party, before Yuugi finds out about Yami and Isis, Yami, Bakura, and Marik all screw. When Marik is gone, Bakura reveals to Yami, that he KNOWS what Yami and Isis did. Soon after Yuugi is in the psych-ward, and Otogi and Honda get together, Marik, and Bakura duel. But Ryou and Malik come, and Malik makes Marik for fit. THEN they find Ryou and Bakura making out, and soon, Malik and Marik are also making out, while they are all in the Shadow Realm... is that about right? Please E-mail me to tell me if I got this right or not O.o

DAMN GURL....you sure know how to keep ur readers interested..this fic kicks ass!!
^_^

nice fic
poor yugi
oh well

Your story is soooo cool! I really enjoyed it!

Hikaru: Its...over...?
Marik: ...
Hikaru: NO! MORE! *ish hit on head with a rock* *falls unconscious*
Marik: *self-satisfied sigh* There...that should shut her up for awhile...at least long enough to dispose of her body....
Bakura: 0.0 how'd I get in this fucken' review?
Marik: *shrugs* I don't know...
*both run off to Shadow realm to...well, you get the basic drift*
***With the end of a story comes the end of reviews...at least for this story, anyways...but I'll be back! *evil physcotic laughter* ***

It's wonderful, good ending. I really enjoyed reading it, you did a very good job.

*falls over laughing* I love the ending! Woohoo, Ryou playing with Marik's Rod. YES!! *blinks* ahem....

*giggles* testicular fortitude... love it.

Ooooo Yami as Bakura's bitch?! SWEET!!! I'd love to see that side story.

*whispers* Awww Marik got all cuddly. That's just sooo cute!

Great story! I'm gonna miss them!

KB

Really good chapter I can't wait for the squeal! and what were the other tratis that Marik lost?

hehe, Pansy-Marik is awesome!! *giggles* hid the tape from Kaiba ;) Yugi will be better in sequel, you say? I still wanna strangle him for hurting Mokie... Ryou/Malik/Marik/Bakura?? *faints*

am feeling a great sympathy for yami right now. poor little guy.

SEQUEL!!

gonna mosey on over to fictionpress.net...am a first timer there ;)
see you soon
Tanya~

You have real talent please finish the story

Yours sencirly Nightmare