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by MarikIshtar77

person Bakuraluva/DreamingChild
schedule March 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Mmmm.... half naked Joey lying under a ceiling fan on a hot muggy summer day... just the thing I need to heat up this friggen snow day!!!
person Bakuraluva/DreamingChild
schedule March 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG poor Ryou and Malik, esp. Ryou... all the blood and gore!!! Those two (M and B) are animals! But I know, that's the way you like it! XD
person bakurasgirl
schedule March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Malik wiggles butt in the air as tied down to bed* FRIENDSHIP! FRIENDSHIP! FREIENDSHIP! hehehehe....
Those poor hikaris....poor RyouWUFF HIM HIM!!! *hugs bleeding, naked ryou!*
person bakurasgirl
schedule March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow! more next chappie!! DAMN THAT WAS HOT! I love it when Marik gets all demanding.

Marik: I can't believe I bottomed to the tomb-robber!
Bakura: you enjoyed it, Rod-Boy.
Marik: OO

MORE MORE MORE! Sorry......just had steak for dinner! mmmm...I like meat.
person bakurasgirl
schedule March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YEAH! I SQUISH RYOU NOW! *squishes Ryou*
Gods! Bakura needs some action!!! mmmmmmmmmm.....marik x bakura
person Horizont
schedule March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi!

Wow, that's great, I love it! The chapters are very short though - but hey, I surely won't care as long as you update soon! *puppy dog eyes*
Will there be more Marik/Bakura? They are gorgeous, aren't they? *likes those two best*
Oh, and I do appreciate that you keep to the fact that the yamis (although Marik isn't a real yami) don't have their own bodies, that's really interesting to read!

So, ganbatte ne!
Horizont
person bakurasgirl
schedule March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor ryou....Can I squish him unte ste stops breathing??????????? PLease??????????????
I know he'll be fine