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by MarikIshtar77

person Tanya Maxwell
schedule April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whoo!! It's Friday and I got to read the whole thing!!

Best Mental Picture Ever: Malik: (half drunk and taking a bubble bath) ) Get some duct tape on that kids mouth or I’m going to fucking ki-“

*shiver*

Can't wait for more of the same!
Tanya~
person Deb
schedule April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow i loved this chapter!!! i love kura/ryou pairings tho, so that was great!!!
I wont review when u post next coz ill be in France, but i promise ill review as soon as i get back!!!
Lotsa Luv and Huggles
Debs xxx
person Golden sun freak
schedule April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whohoo! That was awesome you know ^_^ I read the whole story just now and it's great, you seem to be updating your story really fast, I like that, but poor little Yugi T_T I feel kinda sad fot that little cuttie, I think Kaiba is up to something nasty isn't he? Man Bakura and Marik are real beasts! but you discripe those scenes really good, and Isis is a real bitch yeah, poor Tristan,l I l I can't wait to read more, you are a very good author that's one thing for sure ^_^
person Horizont
schedule April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Waaah! You can't mean that! He's just playing with him...? Seto and Jou... *cries out loud* Does that mean there won't be more sewwt lemons with those two? T_Tx
Hey, who was that guy Seto talked to on the phone... Yami? He wanted Yugi to break up with Jou, t wot would make sense (and there aren't many Charas left, most of the guys were busy fucking out on the streets using a certain Rod... it surely can't be Yugi, Malik and Ryou are off because of their yamis' actions. Tristan was with Ishizu, they both wouldn't work anyway, so... oh, I don't think it's Otogi either, so it can only be Yami. Here I go, investigating!
Well, now it's your turn - continue! You're a great author! ^_^x

Horizont
person Deb
schedule March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo who're the newcomers???? Hehe the Malik/Kura scene was funi!! Excellent chapter!!! I love this story!! Woooo!!!
Please update soonies!!
Lotsa Luv Debs xxx
person Deb
schedule March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooo please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!
Whats Marik going to do???? *chews fingernails*
Oooo im so excited!!!!! God i love this story!!!!!
Lotsa Luv Debs xxx
person Malikslittlefriend
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
n-no...it ended...it can't end! WHAT HAPPENS?!?! Oh...such a pwetty story. Well, keep on writing. (although I'm not a fan of the KaibaxJoey pairing, it wasn't bad) I'll be looking forward to reading the next chapter.
person mariks_toy_hikaru
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hikaru: *drools*...0.0...wow....
Marik: -.-; no one is suppossed to know about these things...
Hikaru: Oh, come on, Rod-Head, I was gonna find out sooner or later. You know you liked it. *winks*
Marik: ...
Hikaru: ^-^ Anyways, keep up the good work! I wanna read the next chapter!
Marik: No! You are forbidden to read this story from here on!
Hikaru: Screw you, Rod-Head. Go fuck Bakura.
Marik: ...just wait until I get my rod back, bitch...
person Deb
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo please update again soon!!! This story is soo good i love it!!!!
Is there going to be something with Tristan and Serenity hmm???? Naughty tristan hehe
Lotsa Luv Debs xx
person Deb
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo what'll happen now hmm??? Both at the same Pizza place....theres gonna be trouble!! Is Bakgoingoing to take advantof Yof Yugi *grins evily* ahem...i mean....aww poor thing...
Please update soon, i love this story!!!
Lotsa Luv
Debs xxx

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