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by MarikIshtar77

person Golden sun freak
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I tell you what: THIS IS GETTING BETTER AND BETTER!!!! hahahaha you must really hate that Isis hahaha that bitch ^_^ well well well who's that in Seto's bedroom, I have the feeling that it's not Joey, but that may be just me ^_^ Ryou and Marik finally together! WHOHOOO!!! just 1 word for you: CONTINUE!!!!
person Deb
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooooo who's the intruder??????? Naughty Seto!!! hehe
I loved the Malik/Ryou part and Kura's appearence was excellent hehe!!!! Wow! Malik can drink!!! lmao!
Anyways, brilliant chapter!!! Cant wait for more!!!!
Lotsa Luv and Huggles
Debs xxx
person Tanya Maxwell
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, who's that? Inquiring minds want to know!! Aww, I love Malik...he's such a sweetie? Was all the alcohol Bakura's? He's gonna be mad when he finds out! hehehe... more soon ;)

Tanya~
person Tanya Maxwell
schedule April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Happy Easter!! *gives chocolate* I've never seen dice in cars in real life...only on tv, lol. Am loving the story! *pokes Ryou and Malik* Something's ' o' on there ;) I hope Isis gives Tristan a good kick...hehehe. Am feeling evil today. Hm. I best go make the best of it. ^_^
Tanya~
person Deb
schedule April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hehe im going to think of him now! lol those dice are funi!!
GREAT chapter!!!!!!! LOVED IT!!!!!!! oooo so Maliks going to move in with Ryou.....hmm opertunities arise!!! hehe ^___^ i cannot wait to see what happens next, seriously im on the edge of my seat....need more....hehe
Lotsa Luv and Huggles
Debs xxx
person Golden sun freak
schedule April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I knew it! I knew it! ^_^ Yami loves Yugi! heh heh heh, well that was great! update soon! ^_^
person Punky_Demon_Grl
schedule April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
gah best one yet! more soul room encounters for Ryou! I like him like that!! haha. and of course I beg of you more Marik/Malik encounters like TL pt.1 hehe!
person TanyaMaxwell
schedule April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww, fluffy yami/yugi cuteness! *grin* I never knew Ryou could be so...damn...whew, ok, I'm ok...

no I'm not...

*hugs*

Tanya~
person Golden sun freak
schedule April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAARRRRGGGGGHHHH!!!! CLIFFHANGERS KILL ME!!!!! what's Yami gonna say? Well I think I know what it is, oh well continue soon ^_^
person Punky_Demon_Grl
schedule April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi. oh wow... I never EVER write reviews... though i'd like to I just.. i can never really find things intelligent enough to say without lookin stupid. LOL. I just wanted to say I've been following your story from the get go and I just LOVE it. I wanted to review many times before... but i'm kinda shy. Anywho, I seriously loved Tough Love part 1. namely..... the scene between Marik and Malik! I never thought a yaoi scene could be THAT inticing (did I spell that right?) and wow! lol. Usually... i steer away from Marik X Malik, just cause I kinda like them with other characters for some reason. I just wanted to let you know that I love your story, I always check back to see if you've updated and I'm happy when I see you have. and I'd love to see more scenes like the M/YM scene. Marik tellin Malik what to do..... * purr* LMAO sorry... the demon in me... right? or should I call it Yami..lol. well... keep up the fantastic work, i hope to hear from ya or see a post soon. either's fine! ^_^ Maybe you'll post on my birthday next week how kick ass that would be! tee hee! Thanks for being such a cool writer!