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by MarikIshtar77

person wildfire\'s flame
schedule April 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooooh very very nice. I have beeen reading this solid all the way though. I can't wait to see the next chapter. Kep up teh awesome work.
person Deb
schedule April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter as usual!!! ^_^
I wonder what 'loss' Marik will have....and who was with Mokuba??? Argh need more!!! I swear i have withdrawl symptoms after not reading your story hehe its so kool!!!!
Please update again soonies!!!
Lotsa Luv
Debs xxx
person Tanya Maxwell
schedule April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
And there are so many things that I do not know, but that I wish I had the answer to... I gotta agree with Marik though, Bakura *is* sexy. Really sexy. Really, really...ok, you get the point. ^_^ Can't wait for more...especially Joey's little scheme ;)

Tanya~

PS - the thing you might be missing to play the file could be a DivX player. You can download it at divx.com.
person ACIDFLOWER
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your bitch here to give you your 100 review *does a dance* Go me!

Bakura: You should go back to your fic and cause the Pharaoh more pain.
Yami: Nooo...i think that's alright I'm sick of always being the one hurt in your fanfics ACID
AF: Well someone as to hurt your sexy ass
Bakura; *Rise hand* Oh Oh me please I love to hurt him. Not in a sex way that is
Jou: Hmmm...I have no idea why i'm in this review
Yami: Because she's in love with you now Jou so you have to play apart of her sick fucking games called fanfics
Jou: Does that mean I have to review fics to?
Yami: Yeah...somehow Bakura always comes in here...but he's not welcome.
Bakura: Fuck you I'm not! I'm the best fucking guy on the show.
Jou: Oh come on I'm the 2 place runner up in Duelist Kingdom, I'm the best.
Yami: Hate to break this to you guys, but the show is around me.
AF: Shut up everyone. Sorry about that see what happens when I let them review

*yelling in background*

UPDATE! YOU KNOW I LOVE IT!


person Elle-FaTe2x1
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That last chpter was great! I'm glad those guys are in the Shadow Realm!! (Sorry if there's a lot of spelling errors) Poor Ryou;
Bakura ans Marik *shakes head* Always getting into trouble. *sigh* Well can't wait to see what's going to happen *burm Tristan blushy found on floor* Muahahahahah!!!!!
person Deb
schedule April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter!!!!
Poor Ryou!! Hehe i wonder what those two Yamis will do in that cupboard....hmmm....hehe! ^_^
Oooo i wonder what Jou is gonna do to Seto???
Im prolly totally and utterly wrong but im thinking the father of isis' baby could be...se..seto? and that that was who he was talking to and not Mokuba (it was a cover up....maybe...) oh i dont kno, probably wrong...
Anyways, cant wait to see what happens next!!!!
Lotsa Luv and Huggles
Debs xxx
person Kat
schedule April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*cracks up* Bakura and Marik as Rock and Roll Stars! Beautiful! I loved it. I can't wait to see what sort of torture ol' Seto is in for! Who the hell is putting up with Isis' pregnant insanity this time?!?!?! And what is on that tape?? Duuuude, Yami?? *G* I think I've covered most of those bases, yes?
person Kat
schedule April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo!! I'm glad you updated. Sorry to hear you've been ill. Oooo hotel room gets trashed? YES!! Can't wait for that. I also can't wait to see what's gonna happen to Seto. *EG*
person Tanya Maxwell
schedule April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hm... I want to know what's on that tape! I also want to sneak into the closet that Marik and Bakura are currently hiding in. Seriously, I'd pay to get in! lol. Lovin' da ficcie so far, can't wait for more!!

Tanya~
person ACIDFLOWER
schedule April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWWWWWWWW OMFG that was so cute ^____^ove ove yami and yugi they'll always be the best pair to me then jou and Yami. That made me smile thank you hon! I was in a bad mood last night. That was really sweet when Yugi was shaking his goods. He's got the ass to do it that's for sure.

*Pulls yami's ear* Now Come I need to hurt you somemore in my new fic
Yami: Don't let her take me!!!
Bakura: Hahah that's it scream you ass.

^__^ great update, I love your work

your pal ACIDFLOWER