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for Before Repentance

by Suya

person Assenav
schedule June 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this story so very much and please update thatwould be wonderful and awesome!!!_!!!
person jessara40k
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was incredible. Can I add my vote to the people who want a sequel?
person Joeu
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That's creepy. The way Joey carried out his revenge--well, word-wise--is exactly how I would carry out my own revenge - and I roleplay Joey on a forum. Haha, I really liked this fic. I love Duke, don't get me wrong, but I still really liked it.
person smalvina
schedule July 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
good story
i liked it
person Renee
schedule June 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
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Freaky, but very, very, very well written. I want to cry. You're a great writer. This did scare the crap out of me though.
person MistressofDragons
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AHH! perfect.

there is something so deliciously wrong about this! and so right. . . i'd obey your request for flames but. . . i can't find anything to flame. . . good grammer and vocab. . . good flow. . . well written. . . good characterization. . . and. . . i liked the plot. . . the situation. . . so deliciously wrong and yet so right. . . non con and questionable consent have become a. . . hobby of mine. . . especially in my darker pieces. . . not that i've posted many of them. . . not entirely brave enough. . .

i just love the way you ended it by the way. . . stark. . . perfect. . . did i mention that you are pure genius?

anyway i have stuff to writ ja ja mata! write on!
person Dirty D
schedule March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Uuhhh flames are the best part? Why? Because you can laugh at them maybe? I don't understand. Anyway, UGH! What a mean ass Joey, but goond ynd you were right. This was dark, (duh!) but it makes me wonder, if they didn't like Duke so much why did they hang around him? O_O That was the one thing that I was lost on. Good story.
person Felidae
schedule March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn, that was..awesome! I don't know, wether to hug you, or scurry away from you in fear. Great angst, gorgeus sex scene, nice mental games..this story goes straight to my fav list!^^
person darkarc
schedule March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Just, wow. I don't find many stories I enjoy as much as I enjoyed this one. A very well written piece. I'd be interested in reading more if you write what happened after, although it would also stand well as a one off piece. Well written, great story. Love it.
person alostblackcat
schedule March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
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