rate_review Reviews

I like how both stories intermingle...I think you could even combine them and just have both storylines running at the same time...or do you have different directions in which both set of characters is going?...I really want to know more about Kaiba and Jou's relationship...it sounds just like mind-blowing sex right now, but does Kaiba feel more?...and it would have been good for the second chapter to be either the 'next day' scenario where they confront each other or the scene prior to the one in 'Scorched Existence' where Jou is pissed off...but that's just my opinion...Hope to see this one and 'SE' updated! Don't disappoint! Ja! ^-^

Within the realm of fanfiction there is no such thing as too dirty. No little smutt or too much. Seriously, the more detailed lemons, the better for me. And yesh, I mind has been tainted.

Don't stop with this story..Please continuou..Please *looks with pleading eyes*
It has already been almost three months of waiting for an update..
Please update?...

love the story the way it is....can always to a little more or a little less as the chapter and situation requires...but it seems like a good amount to me

I like your smut level! It's just under the amount to make me feel really dirty for reading the story.

Gotta love that bit with Ryou and the muttered answers Kaiba gave. Whoa... you made Kaiba fricken' scary!! I like it! More more more!!! Pleeeeeeze *imitates Jou's puppy dog eyes*

Ohhhh, don't even ask me those last questions. I always have fun seeing how far some people will go.

YAY! A plot! Joey claiming rape, now they gotta work together....eww....brawl impending. Update soon

Wow! Here I thought the first chapter was going to be a one-shot... I can't wait to find out what happens to Seto now!

Awww!!! Mush! You all know it was mush. Pure, simple, mush. Sentimental!Seto kicks ass! ^__^

hey nice story I liked it and I think it could use a little more detail hehehehe