AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Scorched Existence

by DirtyHentaiGoddess

schedule June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh no, you left it!! It was growing ! You just needed to feed it and water it and maybe talk to it a bit. NO NO NO

Give it some love... LOL
person Jessica
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AAAIYYYEEEEEE!!!!! NO!!! NOT THE FORMIDABLE CLIFFHANGER!!!!...This sounds ~so~ good! You have to continue! I must know if Bakura has something to do with sending him to the 'E Wing' and why Ryou is having all these time lapses...is it because Bakura is taking over his body?...And if so, what exactly is he doing?...Is he trying to force Ryou to like Malik so Ryou can back off on him? Or does ~he~ like Malik?...I am so confus_ed!...@~@...please update so that all these questions can finally be answered! This story has thoroughly intrigued me!...Oh, and the non-con wasn't as graphic as many I have read so there should be no reason to flame! Hopefully, I'll see ya back soon with a new update! Ja! ^____^
person War-chan
schedule October 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LOVE PLZ WRITE MORE SOON!!!!!! THAT MEANS UPDATE!!!!!! ^______^

Ja ne
Miss War-chan
person DirtyLittleHentaiLover
schedule September 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WRIGHT MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Tana
schedule May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, so far so good. I like how poor Ryou stays in character. The others, I haven't decided yet. You haven't had them around for very long anyways. ^_^ Keep up the good work, and write faster! Naw, just kidding. Write more though, I'm interested. Is Bakura taking Ryou over during parts of the day? It wouldn't surprise me, since the little hikari seems to be in trouble whenever he snaps back to reality.
person Telpei
schedule March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooh! Ryou's having lapses in memory eh? This is getting good, do continue!
person Eres
schedule March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What? What happened to Ryou....damn clifhanger! Awww, please update soooon! You're so mean to leave it hanging. Anyway it was really good, and you ended it with a very good cliffie too, anoying at that! ^^ I demand that u update soon! ^^
person Alissa
schedule March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
well this story is truely awesome, Bakura is my favorite character, I'm glad someone write a good story about him ^_^ continue soon please!
person EgyptianGoddess
schedule March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awww *sniff* that was so sad! Poor Ryou! Will Bakura ever return his love? please! UPDATE this isw good! I wanna see what happens next! ^_^