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person someone
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Odd... but still a good story.
person silverfox
schedule February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ALL I HAVE TO SAY IS THIS IS THE KINKEST FUCKING STORY I'VE EVER READ PLEASE CONTINUE I MUST HAVE MOOOOOOOORE!!

SO PLEASE UPDATE SOON OKAY!!!

UNTIL NEXT TIME BYE BYE

P.S. GREAT STORY KEEP DOING SUCH GREAT WORK!!

LET ME KNOW WHEN YOU GET READY TO POST THE NEXT CHAPTER!!
person nicky
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
uhm... what can I say? This is SOME interesting story!
I'm not the person who likes everyone to have sex and kisses with everyone else around, so this really wouldn't be my type of story, seriously...
However your language style and basic form of the story caught me. It's cool to hear it all from Joey's point of view and in his way of speaking and also you seem to always find the right timing for everything...
That's what made me read on... and of course to find out who Jun's got a crush on ;)
So... yeah... keep going!
person Nomalaz
schedule December 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YOOHOO! It's me again! Just wanted to wish you a very Merry Christmas! Please update when the holiday madness is over. Love ya! ::big hug::
person kaijou (seto yami koi, just to lazy to sign in)
schedule December 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
THIS IS AWESOME!! they sound exactly like my friends, 'cept i'm more of the deranged, evil laughter type.... >.> what?
Yami: i said too true.
Seto: oh this should be good..am
kaijou: BOY!! *gapes for a moment then kisses him* I love ya!
seto: ahh the unexpected
kaijou: *fading out* now kiss seto!
yami: wait.... what...?.......
person ZymZum
schedule November 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
fuck me please update!!!!!!!!
person SaintnamedSpider
schedule November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YES! You're BACK! This last chapter was quite the comeback. I look foward to pure EVIL from Rina twisted mind. Long live the fucking!!
person Kat
schedule October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*laughs evilly* That boyfriend of Mai's is sooooo gonna be hurting!

See if you didn’t know by now, all of us, are a freaky, fucking, group of friends.
*cackles* if people haven't figured that out by now, what are they doing here?!

Joey getting stuck next to the lesbians?! *falls over laughing* And he's not walking with a limp yet?! *howls* I bet whomever he nails is gonna be walking funny for a week!!

Love it!

Kat
person Nomalaz
schedule October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I didn't expect an update this fast. A possible Tristen/Rina encounter, very nice. No Bakura, that's okay (just file under "for later use").
Yay! You used my suggestion! ::hugs again:: Imagine my reaction when I was reading.

But what I didn’t expect to see was Tea walk over to Jun and offer her hand out to help her up.
(Wait a second...)
But, it didn’t end there when Tea helped Jun up they began to walk in the direction of Jun’s room.
(I don't believe it...)
Well I couldn’t go to sleep since my bedroom was right by Tea’s and Jun‘s. I’m telling you I didn’t know girls could get that damn loud!
(::falls out of chair:: OH MY GOD!!)

LOL I am very honored. Keep writing and I'll be waiting.
person Deb
schedule October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter !!
!!
Man i need friends like Yami. If he did that everytime i felt like shit, id prolly break my own legs so i could get the kissies hehe ^_^
Sorry im just hyped that you updated!! Weeeee!!!!
Ooooo Tristan and Rina is interesting!! I wonder where that will go....prolly to the bedroom no doubt...
Cant wait for more!!! Its soooo great!!!
Much Luv and Huggles!
Debs xxx