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February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I read your story and I liked it. You have good plot and flow in your story and your English is good, just a few spelling mistakes. You should continue this story; it has a lot of potential not only in this story but with possible sequels as well. I like to see good writers continue thir work. You should as well.
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February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes! Yes! Yes! Please continue!!! It's a great story!
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February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*tugs on nice author's shirt* Umm, please? I'd like to know what happens next.
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February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I for one would like it if you would continue this story...please? ^_^
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February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please continue! Very good so far. I want to see what happens next! I love Seto/Jou pairings.
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February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Keep writing. This is a good start for a story. As far as your English is concerned this is one of the best ways to work on it. Keep it up.
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February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story! Poor jounouchi! I realyl do hope you continue this fic!