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for Broken Wings

by yugistenshi

person Kat
schedule March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
worth the waiSorrSorry to hear about the wrist and the writer's block! Hope both clear up soon and with a minimum of pain, 'cause I seriously wanna see where this story goes! *snickers*
person kay
schedule March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The part with the car sound just like gravitation. I don't know if you seen it before or what but it reminded me of gravi (an anime you have to to see if you are a yaoi fan) if not then it's all good. I just wanted to say that that's all. I love it it's so sad. I can't believe he just drove off like that. Ass. O well, they get together later don't they?? I really hope tehy do. Keep writeing it's good
person Cherry-Wolf
schedule March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please continue!! I think it sounds really interesting and maybe insighting? PLEASE CONTINUE!!

Will there be a lemon? ^^;;

Arigatou! Ja ne.
person Coffeena
schedule March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Cool!!! Ur a good writer. A lot better than I could have! Please write more!!
~Coffeena ^____^
person leaf zelindor
schedule March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooo please continue? -tilts head- i didn't see to many mistakes if any ^_^ i would love to see more ~Leaf~
person Brokenrose
schedule March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
KEEP GOING! I love the Seto/Katsuya pairing! it's one of my favorites!
person Kiawna
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I vote for continuing! This story has potential. Can't wait for the next chapter.
person Youko jagainshi
schedule March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
he hit him???... anyway the story was good hope u update soon
person JadeDarkFeather
schedule March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Its a good Story keep it up. I look forward to your next chapter.
person Anon
schedule February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your fic is fine and I think you shouontiontinue even if you don't get many rewiews. ^_^