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for Broken Wings

by yugistenshi

person Mazu
schedule January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh come on! It's '09 and you still haven't updated? *Meanie* |=^) <- this is Fred
person moonlight_wing
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*ahem* DAMMIT UPDATE ALREADY IT WAS JUAST GETTING INTERESTING!!!lol XD
person mistfairy
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like it so far... hope u'll update soon...cheers!!
person anubiset
schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kissage good. Very good. Seto needs to get over this. Jou needs to realize that it will take a while. They both need someone in their lives. Who better than someone that will accept them. Each other.
person yukiko
schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so sad, he should ... damn his brain should kick his heart butts XD.
person silverfox
schedule June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lovely fic you've got going on great chapter can't wait for the next keep up the good work
person Anon
schedule June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Like the story
person Jessica
schedule June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!...MY HEART STRINGS!...that is so incredibly sad!...You go, Jou, for laying out on the line, and you suck, Seto, for being a prick...*sniff*...j/k...^_^...I really like the story so far and couldn't wait to dive into the angst! I know it'll all work itself out eventually so I can't wait until they finally get together! Hey, we got a kiss...won't be long now before we get something more...
person koalared
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was heartbreaking! Good job conveying their angst. Looking forward to the next chapter.
person Nocturne22
schedule April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! I love to reading this! But, could you make the chapters a little longer? Aside from that, I do like how your dragging out the story, so suspenseful!

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