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by darkvixen

person ....
schedule March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
straight! straight!
person Catty
schedule March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Uh-huh, Ryou is going to get it now, don't know yet. Listen to your master: MORE CHAPS OR I WILL HAVE BAKURA SEND YOU TO THE SHADOW RELAM! [Both of us laughs eveily]
BAKURA: I all ready send Marik and Malik there yesterday, so make sure you are not next on the list! [disappears, then reappears and grab Catty by the waist]
Me: Wait, Bakura, I don't want t leave!
person Anon
schedule March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
then spooky looking raod
person Malik chick
schedule March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
woo! take the left toad! spooky is always better, and it gives Malik and Ryou some "scream and clutch onto my arm" time! yeahh..... i'm overreacting. But I love your story so far! You rock! Woohoo!
-Peace out
person Eres
schedule March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Evil cliffhanger!!! Please continue soon, this suspense is annoying! You have to post soon!!!!!!!! Poor Ryou, he kinda looks cute and sexy as a cat though! Will this be a ryou/Bakura. Malik/Marik or a Marik/Bakura, Ryou/Malik, either way its really nice!

You're evil for leaving it there! Write SOON!!! AS IN SOON!!!! lol
person happy yaoi lover
schedule March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hmmm this has to be an trick......soooo the sunny road leads them in circles,the plain is the short cut and the dark is the normal..yes?>.> well any way i vote straight
person Catty
schedule March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well know, is it going to be a Malik and Ryou or are the demons chasing after them? hmmmm write mor I r I will kill you!
person crazieanimefan1
schedule March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great job! I hope Malik and Inu-Ryou get out! Keep updating! ^_^
person happy yaoi lover
schedule March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
0-0' marik and baku were so mean to poor little ryoh.....T_T poor little kitty.....and they just ran out of the house nekkie?! omr thats gota hurt runnin nekie through the forest
person Catty
schedule March 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, he did get tourotered[sorry if i misspelled that]! I feel sorry for him and Malik....NOT More write more or Freddy will come for you! [EVIL LAUGHS FOR BAKURA AND MARIK]
Marik: I think she islin lin the truth, besides,I'm scared of him,too!
bakura:You're always scared of him,dumbass! Go and uck Malik while the girl makes another chap.
Marik:Oh-la-la! I think I'll go for.....you.[wiggles eyebrows]
Bakura: No, get away...AAAAAHHHHHHHHH! Help me!