rate_review Reviews

o...m..g... I FREAKIN LOVE THIS STORY! I actually just made an account so i could review it. ^_^ I haven't ever seen an ending like that used in fanfiction before. I was not expecting it at all. I have, however, seen it used in a book but only once and it was still different. It was an R.L. Stine book i read when i was younger. I sent the story name to my friend so she can read it. But yeah, i loved the story and now i am off to read the sequeal. Thanks for writing such and awesome story!

Kawaii! Very cute. I thought the part with Malik being kidnapped by the stupid punks was the best part, aside from the tic-tac part. *nods* Very good story! *thumbs up* Keep up the good work like you always have!

Love ya,
Chel

This has to be one of your best works yet! i really enjoyed how it made me feel as if i was really standing there.

This story pulls you into a type of transe {sp?} and i couldnt help but feel as if i was experinceing everything right along with them. Although i'm not a really big fan of the male/male type of reading, i really enjoyed ths one. the emotions in this story was really exclent {sp?} it ALMOST made me cry.

Ok now enough of the "/wanna be collage student-smart ass/" person and now time to be me.

Ok great story line. plot was great!. i like dthe suspence and how you arranged everything. the cuddling part was cute. and as for the blood and gore and everything.. OMG I LOVED IT!!!.. i would say "Great Job" but, it makes me sound like to much of a pussy to say it out loud. anywho, none the less this is one of th best things i've read in a long ass time.

well sorry my review is so short but, i must leave now. well later! Ja matA!!! =^_^=

*grabs bazuka back and loads it with silver color bombs,then shots them at the cliffie giveing arti time to get away* oki i dont get it.......ryou and malik are realy bakura and marik but they dreamd about them selves?@_@ im so confused......and may i sugest cat nip if your gona do another story like this?

omr!!!!!*bounces around room* =^_^= an sequel! sqweeeee!cant wait cant wait cant wait!here,*hands arti an large bag of cat nip* its just an bit extra i have laying around...thought you might need it for the sequel considering the name...besides,my vet says its bad for meh

O__o U can't be serious? can you? That's the end? I really didn't expect that...... You have alnernative ending for this don't you can you please please please send it to me or can you post it? Waaah! I can't believe that this is the end! >_<

I want more Please write more! Ur a fantastic author! ^^

Oh yah! By the way I want a sequel to that!! ^^

~Eres

please continue! It's my fav storie! Mabe It can be a vision of the future but evrything goes wrong. Please contenu!!! PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE *big ryou googely eye's*

I like this ending better! Hehehe! ^__^ Great!

omr!!!!!*bounces around room* =^_^= an sequel! sqweeeee!cant wait canit cit cant wait!