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for It starts with One Thing

by DarkGoddess

person jin1377
schedule November 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay!!! 2:15 a.m. and still up!!!! until 1:30 it's being mad. from that hour 'till 2:30 it's crazy, from that hour 'till i go to sleep it's depressed, crazy and giggly...i'm weird but i don't care!!!!! you stole my identity!!!! i am a mix of bakura and marik and knuckles and shadow but that's besides the point. altough i do have a good side but he's separated fro me. his name is neko mimaki. i'm a girl and i'm acidantly in a boy's body...niiiice!!! love this!!!
person elriconeechan
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
bwahaha...found you,too...
person smalvina
schedule February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was nice
person Nocturne22
schedule November 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! So good and so sad!!!!!!!!!!!
person BrokenDesire
schedule August 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wtf! i hate you! but i love you! so great at writing! but...but...the sadness T____T you make me cry! i____i
person KS
schedule February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hello! Its me kaneda-shotaro and Yami Tetsuo! It was really good! TOo bad they couldnt stay together! i t made me cry ;_;! WAHHH! oh well! i do liek thsi story though! i hope you write mroe stories soon! Good job!
person Santurion
schedule February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really liked it. But not the end, b/c I love happy ends. Oh well, I just pretend, that they stayed together. I hope it doesn't disturb you. =^________ ^=