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schedule March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
XD mentally tormented Ryou! Fun! *cackles*
*snickers* I loved their little role play "Be gentle officer" LoL, that was great
I can't wait till the next chappy!! But I won't rush you ^_^ cuz I know how hard it can be sometimes
Until then, great job!
~YamiRynEnjeru
person crazieanimefan1
schedule March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
^_^ me likes the idea!!! A fic based on the dangers of eating Bakura the Tomb Robber's cooking intitled "Why Bakura Is Never Allowed To Cook In My Home" told by Ryou's POV of course. *giggles* Great update though.

Malik: I think she's had a sugar high.
Me: What makes you think that?
Malik: You're eating the ice cream I told you NOT to eat!
Me: *growls and pulls out my famous book of judgment slamming him on the head with it*
Malik: *_* uhhh... *hits the floor*
Me: What can I say? I love him, but when he bosses me like that, what else can I do?
Bakura: Ooh! Let me do that too!
Me: HEY! You're this author's man, not mine! Better get him over here! Keep updating!
person EgyptianGoddess
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor Ryou, this is just so cute, (the relationship between Bakura/Ryou i mean). I think the guy he killed is Yami, mainly 'cause you mentioned that Ryou was talking to the guy he killed about the 'Heart of the cards' and how it bullshit or something like that any way *sweatdrops* I like Yami, but personally i don't care who you kill, it's up to you, just anyone but Malik!!! I LOVE Malik!!! I swear if you kill him, then i'll tie you to a chair and force feed you Bakura's cooking!

Malik: "Don't mind her she didn't mean it, she's a little overprotective of me"
EgyptianGoddess: *Hugs Malik possessivly in a vice like grip*
Malik: "ACK!...*gasp*...can't breathe..!"

Oh! I know what you could do with Bakura's cooking! *evil grin* Use it to make a bomb, so that the boy's can blast their way out of prison! ^^

Bakura: "I heard that!" *grumbles* "My cooking's not that bad!"
EgyptianGoddess: "Oh really...then how come not even the puppy will ea?" ?" *Jou takes one look at the food in EgyptianGoddess's hand and runs away yelping* "I rest my case" ^__^

Sorry 'bout that it's just that i LOVE Malik! *coughs* Anyway GREAT fic! keep up the good work! can't wait to see more, UPDATE!! ^____^
person LadyCresentStar
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i like it,i lub it,i want some more chapters!!sorry,listenin to country,he he i love this story!!very nice.....update soon please!!
person crazieanimefan1
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm like EgyptianGoddess when it comes to Malik! But however, Bakura should stay away from any home ec classes or he might even poison the teacher! See ya soon!
person crazieanimefan1
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Surprised ya, didn't I? *hugs plushy close* Thanx! Oh yeah. I slipped up on something interesting on Bakura. *hands over pics of Bakura in the shower* I had a hidden camera in his shower and I did it just for you! Keep updating and sa soa soon here on ton the other site! BTW, what can he cook? I'm sure he can make something good.
person amy_dangles
schedule February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WIEJ!!!!! It's a funny story, and I like it alot!!!!!

please update soon, that would make me even more happier!!

~Amy~
schedule February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
XD Wow, this fic is cool. *snickers* I always knew Ryou had issues, Hmmm...just cuz he hates me already, I say he killed Yami ^_________^ I don't know, I think it's cute *_*;; anything w/Bakura&Ryou is usually cute though, so yeah...*hee* don't mind me, I've been awake too long to think clearly...
I really like this fic, continue soon! You're doing a great job ^_______^
~YamiRynEnjeru
person madness
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great fic! glad you'll continue!
person crazieanimefan1
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice! I like this one! Ryou is always innocent though. Bakura is too (when he wants to be). Good job and keep updating!