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person amy_dangles
schedule March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
IIE!!!! Don't let lelio hurt li'll pour (I won't mention the fact he killed yugi -__-') Ryou!!!!!!

~Amy~
person Venus
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you have to continue! I'm duing here! I want to read more! -__-
This is a great story, please update soon!
person crazieanimefan1
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
BAKURA! LET BAKURA TAKE HIM BACK! It's the best thing for them both. ^_^ Great update!
person Eres
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lelio is a really cool charcter, I didn't expect that he'd be a guy.guy. Um, actually since I find him cool I don't mind him getting dirty with Ryou-kun, but then again Bakura's the only one who's supposed to touch him! >_< Ack!!! How anoying, this is all Bakura's fault!!!!!!! Can't he just rescue Ryou then and there!!!!! Ne does Lelio really love Ryou? Or is he just after the sindicate or something?

Waah! You have to update!!!!!!!! T_T
person Bambi
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, yes, surprising but good!!! I'm glad Baku loves Ryou...and can't wait to see how he will get him back!!! Great job update soon!

~Bambi
person Hikari Rioki
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
^________^

*evil laughter*

Poor confused little Ryou...
schedule March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! I love this fic so far, and having Ryou punch Bakura is something I would never have eted ted for him to do! ... then again... I wouldn't have expected for him to kill Yugi either. Either way, Ryou is kick ass in this fic! The song was also perfect for Ryou in this fic too.
person Cutesunshine12
schedule March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AHHGGGG!!!!This is such a great story!! WRITE MORE WRITE MORE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!
Cutesunshine12
person Eres
schedule March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Cos als always, a few gramatical errors but it was fine nevertheless, please continue
person amy_dangles
schedule March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
IIE!!!! Don't stop now! I wanna know what happens further with poor (or should I say 'EVIL'?!) 'Kura!!!!!

~Amy~