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person Deb
schedule April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ryou is silly, he should have just gone with Malik and Marik lol
Great chapter, i loved it as usual!!! I wonder what will happen now...hmm, will Kura save him??? Me hope so muchly!!!
Please update again soon!!!
Lotsa Luv and Huggles Debs xxx
person Eres
schedule April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
how could you be so mean......continue it soon! >_< So, Do you take up Romeo and Juliet? That's so cool! Did you actually have to memorize a soliloguy/line from Romeo and Juliet in your school......ours was Julius Caesar.......Hehehe ^^

Uhh.....anyways, it was really really nice. I really loved it! Update SOON!
person crazieanimefan1
schedule April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Bakura better save Ryou fast! Great update! The Romeo and Juliet fit in perfectly! I can't wait to see what happens. Oh yes, another great update deserves a reward. *sneaks pics of Bakura dancing at a bar*
person Eres
schedule March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Malik and Ryou are not a bad couple. I actually like them together too, and I think his better that Lelio. Hehehe.^^ Ryou seemed a little vain in this chapter but I guess that just because he was drugged. Uh.....What happened to Bakura? Does Hestill hurt in um.....yah certain parts? ^^Please continue, sorry it took me long to review! Post! ^^
person Cao
schedule March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
If Lelio touches Ryou in any harmful way, I will bite your head off, k? Now keeping typing!
person SweetMisery1
schedule March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love this story but my question is will Ryou understand while hes under the influence of the drug?
person Deb
schedule March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo whats going to happen now??? Hmm the Malik/ryou bit was.....interesting lol specially with that vibrator Malik used haha that was great! hehe
Anyways, please update again soon huni!! i love this story sooo much...thankies ^___^
Lotsa Luv and Huggles
Debs xxx
person RookieHunter
schedule March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Haha!! I loved when you put all of our names at the top of the page!! Haha!! That was GREAT!! I can't wait to find out what happens! Oh yeah Bakura should come in Kick Lelio's butt!! Poor Malik, I like him... Ah well... Write more!! Write more!! I wanna know what happens!!
person RookieHunter
schedule March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey this is getting really good, this is the first time that I've read this, and I think that it should just be Ryou and Bakura. They are just too cute together. I hope that you update soon, I can not wait to find out what happens to Ryou and how Bakura takes what happens to him. Keep writing I'm really enjoying your story!

Rookie-san
person hiei449
schedule March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
sorry forgot to mention BAKURA'S THE ONLY ONE WHO CAN TOUCH RYOU!!!!!!!! but i think you should make it to where Lelio tries to get down and dirty but Ryou stops him but that's just my opinion