AFF Fiction Portal
person Yugi\'s Teddy Bear
schedule April 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yay that was hot! lol Ryo( i dont remember how to spell it) is such a cutie pie! i love this keep writing!
person Yugi\'s Teddy Bear
schedule April 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey, i really love your story and i REALLY like your 'blue dragon' character. Lilio is it? i'm bad with names sorry. Hey i understand if you dont wanna do this but i'm assuming this is gonna end up with Bakura/Ryou (yes i learned how to spell Ryou) ..could you write ..I dunno, and alternate universe fic with Lilio/Ryou? its really sweet the way he's so cute, and i like an innocent/innocent in a yugioh slash fic for once, oh well i'l read all of this and please email me at chip@viets.com and we could talk about your story , even if you get writers block mabey i could help you out ^_~
person silent angel
schedule April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! what happends? i cant wait for the next chappie its gonna be good! this is like my fav stroy ^_^
schedule April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn, Malik is sexy. Bakura is too. I still can't see Ryou as a murderer. Oh, and a question... how the hell does Bakura know the words to Romeo and Juliet? Ryou I can understand, he's smart like that, but Bakura?
person Eres
schedule April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O_o HEEEEEY!!!!!!!! Don't kill Bakura!!!!!You can't! You just can't.....it's not right! Hehehe, but good chapter nevertheless! Ryou kicks ass...uhh....! Anyways midsummer night's dream with the YGO characters sounds cool! I haven't read it yet, but I saw it in a play once. ^^
Please continue soon, and please please don't let Bakura die!! So there, I'm looking forward to more! ^^

~ERES~
schedule April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I thought I recongized you! If you saw the girl with a bit of a tomboy style, that's me. I had my handy digital with me. *looks at the pics grinning* You know, we should start our own line of work spying on yamis and hikaris like a private investigation type thing. *grins* Anyway, great update. I hope Bakura and Ryou didn't get hit! I don't want either to die! Please! Anyway, c ya later!
person sunday
schedule April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WRITE MORE WRITE MORE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i've fallen in love with this story. please write another chapter, please make it good...pplleeaassee????? *bad pad puppy eyes* p p p p please.....
person WIEJ .... NOOOOO!!!!!!
schedule April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
NOOO!!!!!! i'll hate you forever if kura of ryou dies!!!!!!
person Lt.Shen
schedule April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
GREAT! I'm telling you that i can't wait to see what Ryou does!! Kick his butt Ryou!! Punch him in the face like you did to Weevil!! I can't wait for you to update!! I hope that you update Soon!! Bakura has to come and save Ryou!! ^_^ I love Bakura He's so Kakoi!! ^_~
person WIEJ!
schedule April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOO!

Do NOT let anything happen to ryou-chan!!!!!