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April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow. good ending! Ryou and Bakura, in my opinion, is the best yaoi pairing ever! (even though i wish i could have Ryou all to myself...) Anyways, sorry i sorta stopped reading for awhile. i was sick and, well, i kept falling asleep at the computer. please let me know whenever you write another ygo story, k?
Hikari Rioki, aka Bakura's Sworn Enemy
Hikari Rioki, aka Bakura's Sworn Enemy
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April 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whatever did happen to Malik and marik after that! Hehehe! I loved th whole story! Thanks for the wonderful fic, I really enjoyed it! Make more Bakura/Ryou? pleeeeeaaaase? I really love them! ^^
Good Luck with ur other fics!
Good Luck with ur other fics!
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April 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was absolutely excellent! Well done!! Are you going to start a new fic now? Me hope so muchly!! I love your writing!
Bakura - God you're such a kiss ass!
Yeah you know it babe..^_~
Anyways, great story!
Lotsa Luv and Huggles
Debs xx
Bakura - God you're such a kiss ass!
Yeah you know it babe..^_~
Anyways, great story!
Lotsa Luv and Huggles
Debs xx
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April 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this was the greatest ending...and i LOVE THAT SONG!!!!!!!!!
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April 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
-Swoops in and poses- I AGREE WITH MAKKY AND MARIK! >3 Write a ficcu starring them! Because all your fics are damn great, but never star them Dx
So...Plot can be....-Think.- Oh! Makky can be an exotic dancer, Marik can be someone who goes and kiddnaps Makky, Baku gets pist since he owns teh club, and Ryou just goes and clings to Baku all the time.
FEAR MY HALF ASS PLOT! -Bow-
Anywhoo, about this fic:
GODDAMNFUCKINGAWESOMEWISHTHEREWEREMORE!!! Lelio is hawt..And Kinky..Loved the MakkyxRyou scene. Damn hot.
So...Plot can be....-Think.- Oh! Makky can be an exotic dancer, Marik can be someone who goes and kiddnaps Makky, Baku gets pist since he owns teh club, and Ryou just goes and clings to Baku all the time.
FEAR MY HALF ASS PLOT! -Bow-
Anywhoo, about this fic:
GODDAMNFUCKINGAWESOMEWISHTHEREWEREMORE!!! Lelio is hawt..And Kinky..Loved the MakkyxRyou scene. Damn hot.
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April 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love the ending song/lemon! The finale with Anzu was a little random, but it made Anzu look flaky which is always funny. I like this dark side of Ryou, i hope it follows him in your other fics! Can't wait to read your next work.
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April 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WIEH!!!! The ending was great .... it even had my nickname in it!! .... WI!!! !!!
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April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo...*gasps for breath* ooooooooooooooooooooooo lol pleaze continue. I think u ment honeymoon suit and i think once you wrote sweat instead of sweet but other that that i loved it. I understand about spelling though, i suck at it and its worse when your mistakes are actual s its it makes life so much harder. don't kill of bakura he's too kute
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April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story. I have been reading it for quite a while but forgets to review. Please update soon.
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April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
aww I like Yugi why'd you have to make him evil? oh well, the goodness of this story makes up for thil bil bit, anyways, omg i really hope bakura and ryou are okay!!! that Lelio turned out to be a freak dont write a ryou/lelio story nvm about my previous idea, anyways, write more soon please i love this!